Critique my Pony OC?

[Padlock-Keys 57]

First of all - I can understand if someponies out there think that my OCs are kinda bland, or just plain boring. .I understand that because I dont make my ponies's designs very flashy or cute. But I mightttttt be a bit of a hypocrite here because Violet Rose's design is cutesy and flashy just by a tad bit'. 

 

So thats why I'm saying bare with me here and just pay attention to the stories. Also, dont judge my grammar >_<! Thats not what I'm looking for... I've got a fanfic up that I want a little feedback on about my OC Padlock Keys which I'll also post called He & I - so I'll post that below. Thanks so much! 

 

(Note about the grammar: I know that mine isnt the best, but I'm looking for advice on plot points and whatnot, if you want to be a beta-reader sometime for this fanfic I would appriciate it but the thing is that I dont look for advice on grammar is all ^^; ) 

 

Padlock's Bio on MLP Forums

 

The Key's Family

 

Padlock & Apple Tea

 

Padlock's Son - Heroic Tea.

 

Padlock's Daughter - Ivory Excellence

 

Padlock's Mother - Violet Rose.

 

Pony Perler Art of Padlock & Apple Tea

 

Padlock Keys Journal Skin

 

Padlock Keys Plushy View 1 View 2

 

Padlock & Apple Tea Sarubobo duo

 

Padlock Keys Sarubobo

 

Ivory Excellence & Heroic Tea Sarubobo duo

 

Apple Tea

 

Ivory & Hero

 

Fancy Padlock Keys

 

First ever artwork I got of Padlock Keys 

 

Padlock's Bio on a MLP OC Wika 

 

Padlock Key's Bio on DeviantART 

 

Blue Bonnet (Padlock Key's former girlfriend) (Her bio will be added later!) 

 

Jazz Might (Padlock Key's cousin).

 

Fan-Fiction He & I