request shop OC maker

[Lord Bruss 3]

I'm sorry if this is in the wrong place. I'm new here.

 

Here you can make you're own characters and I'll draw them if you would like. Or you can just post about them. I would also like to know if this should go somewhere else.

The OC layout should be like this:

Name:

Cutie mark:

Species(pegasi,unicorn you're own species,etc.)

Bio:

 

Ps:I'm not a good artist yet,but I'd like to improve my skills and what better way than drawing fan ponies?

[eps-3-freak 16]

I'll make up one very fast and I would like to see the results(I want to test you):

 

name:cheeron

cutiemark: a purple, yellow or bleu lightningbolt out of a black cloud

Bio: A high ranked warrior who doesn't wear a warrior or gaurd suit. But if you need someone to take your enemy's down, he's the one. being a master with a sword, he protects the city from it's enemies.

The only poeple he isn't able to defeat UNTIL NOW (there is a future, more enemies may come)  are the EHA members (who are luckily his friend),es and darkchain(darkchain is an enemy).

 

are you able to make something out of this?

[Lord Bruss 3]

I'll have it to you before noon tommorow,Muffin.

Here is his cutie mark:

I'll do cheeron himself next.

And thanks for giving me a chance even though,I'm sorta new:)

Here ya go;)

Cheeron:

Sorry if it's not very good,I'm using a drawing app so it's hard to use and I'm not too food at art yet.

There. You go. I might have to wait for it to load on the page,my internees being stupid. If not I'll message it.

[eps-3-freak 16]

I'll have it to you before noon tommorow,Muffin.

Here is his cutie mark:

I'll do cheeron himself next.

And thanks for giving me a chance even though,I'm sorta new:)

Here ya go;)

Cheeron:

Sorry if it's not very good,I'm using a drawing app so it's hard to use and I'm not too food at art yet.

There. You go. I might have to wait for it to load on the page,my internees being stupid. If not I'll message it.

I hope your intern knees will be okay 

 

not a bad sketch.

Can you try to make a real drawing now?

nah... I am joking, I like it. thanks.

[Lord Bruss 3]

You are quite welcome,glad you liked it;)

[Harmony Cube 80]

I'll have it to you before noon tommorow,Muffin.

Here is his cutie mark:

I'll do cheeron himself next.

And thanks for giving me a chance even though,I'm sorta new:)

Here ya go;)

Cheeron:

Sorry if it's not very good,I'm using a drawing app so it's hard to use and I'm not too food at art yet.

There. You go. I might have to wait for it to load on the page,my internees being stupid. If not I'll message it.

I wanted to view your art before requesting but I'll critique right now and maybe request later. (Especially since I'm on my iPod right now)

1. The back leg is two different colors, one lime green and the other is a lighter lime green, the leg needs to be one color.

2. The back hoof is wider than the rest of the leg.

3. Cutie mark needs to blend in better, try putting the main color over the white part.

4. The head is yellow and the rest of the body is light green.

5. There are no nostrils on the pony.

I hope this list helped you out a bit.

[Lord Bruss 3]

I wanted to view your art before requesting but I'll critique right now and maybe request later. (Especially since I'm on my iPod right now)

1. The back leg is two different colors, one lime green and the other is a lighter lime green, the leg needs to be one color.

2. The back hoof is wider than the rest of the leg.

3. Cutie mark needs to blend in better, try putting the main color over the white part.

4. The head is yellow and the rest of the body is light green.

5. There are no nostrils on the pony.

I hope this list helped you out a bit.

The legs are supposed to be different colors to indicate that the other leg is farther away. The rest does help out,so thanks I'll try to improve;)

[Harmony Cube 80]

The legs are supposed to be different colors to indicate that the other leg is farther away. The rest does help out,so thanks I'll try to improve;)

I was meaning from the pony's perspective it was the left hind leg. Sorry it didn't come out clear.

[Lord Bruss 3]

Oh i see now. Okay,thanks for the tips.

[eps-3-freak 16]

Let's try a new one, and use the tips you just got, take your time.

 

name: peaceheart

cutiemark: a heart with with something heavy on it.

Species:pegasus

bio:even though that he has to go trough all kinds of heavy stuff, this pony tries to keep on believing that he has peace in his heart. when he gets sad his heart feels weaker and more heavy wich aslo make's his chest heavy, still he keeps on standing up. for a weak pony he doesn't know how to give up.He believe's that there is no violonce needed but fights when neccesary, even though he has almost no expirience. he is pretty emotional but stil doesn't stop believing that there is light in his heart(He ain't smaller nor taller then others. same goes for muscle size.)

 

good luck.

[ZukoIsBestPony 561]

Hi! So I have a picture from the OC creator, but no actual art as I suck at drawing, here's a link, please get back to me. Note, I'm an unemployed teenager, so I can't really pay you. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/xanadu-r6055

It would be super super cool if you could draw her doing one of the things in her backstory, one of the happier ones if that's OK.

[Lord Bruss 3]

Okie dokie Louie. I'll get to work on both of yours.

Hi! So I have a picture from the OC creator, but no actual art as I suck at drawing, here's a link, please get back to me. Note, I'm an unemployed teenager, so I can't really pay you. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/xanadu-r6055

It would be super super cool if you could draw her doing one of the things in her backstory, one of the happier ones if that's OK.

Don't worry,this is totally free. Might take a day or so. Though

Here is Xanadu. She is reading a comic book which I placed on a shelf because I am not good at making things look downwards. How'd i do?

I'll work on Peaceheart next.

[Moost 164]

It's poop, might as well draw one yourself sugarcube. It'll actually look a lot better.

[eps-3-freak 16]

It's poop, might as well draw one yourself sugarcube. It'll actually look a lot better.

you are pretty honost. you know, just say lit like that... in this topic... you know what I mean right?...

[Lord Bruss 3]

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Xanadu:

Here you go

I hope you like it.

[An Old Head 4,816]

Seeing as this thread is offering drawing requests, I've moved it to the Requests Guild with a Request Shop prefix. Thanks for understanding.

[Lord Bruss 3]

Thanks,fliptirn. I wasn't sure where this goes,so thanks:)

I'll have truheart done before tommorows over,eps-3-freak.

Here is peace heart. I followed that one guys tips. The wing is a different color to distinguish it from the rest of the pony and the black thing on the cutie mark is a weight.

[Lord Bruss 3]

Does anypony want an OC done?

[Lord Bruss 3]

If any pony wants an OC drawn,I'll do it.

[eps-3-freak 16]

name: peaceheart

cutiemark: a heart with with a tons of bricks on it.

Species:pegasus

bio:even though that he has to go trough all kinds of heavy stuff, this pony tries to keep on believing that he has peace in his heart. when he gets sad his heart feels weaker and more heavy wich aslo make's his chest heavy, still he keeps on standing up. for a weak pony he doesn't know how to give up.He believe's that there is no violonce needed but fights when neccesary, even though he has almost no expirience. he is pretty emotional but stil doesn't stop believing that there is light in his heart(He ain't smaller nor taller then others. same goes for muscle size.)

[Lord Bruss 3]

Here is peaceheart

Here is peaceheart

Here is peaceheart