Belgian&Brony

IM GOING TO SHOOT THEM IF I HAD A CHANCE *suddenly 15000 bomber and 30000 chrstal empire fighers appear* Kids do your ...job If I see those orks again I'll shoot them into pieces ! *black twinkle reloads his luger with 45 caliber bullets* If I see them they shall pay ! *the bombers hit canter lot castle* I'm doomed now....I..guess I'm alone in this battle....

*black twinkle plans defences but almost no pony is old enough to fight* I dont want do this but *black twinkle commands the parents to give up their foals (children) Listen Equestrian kids you are my only hope to win a helpless battle *the foals pick up mortars and guns* Well if kids have the courage to die for me the elements are surely safe then *black twinkle goes to the holy element chamber and sees the two orks* O_O HOLD ON THIEVES *black twinkle picks up his personal luger* GIVE THE ELEMENT BEFORE I MAKE HOLE CHEESE OF YOU !

Canterlot is 256 km northwest from here You can put only defences outside Canterlot Because only ponies can enter the capital of Equestria I'll set my defences inside Canterlot While you put defences outside Canter lot I need to hurry I need new soldiers ! Or Canterlot is one big pile of ash ! *black twinkle hurries to canterlot to plan some defences*

Well the loots are in danger (queen chrystalis: well listen to him if you want to know where the elements are) the elements are in danger If you want them you need to destroy my villain empire because they wan the elements (Queen chrystalis: black twinkle ! Better tell what shall happen tommorow or we shall die !) Well the truth is .....The Mighty Crystal Empire wants the elements I attacked the empire to protect the elements but i failed to win the battle Now they want revenge they want to destroy Canterlot ! You almost destroyed my entire army only 300 soldiers remain to m service ! They want to have Canter lot destroyed TOMMOROW canter lot is the place where the elements are hidden ! Now I can't protect the holy elements thanks to two magical green smurfs !

I'm lucky to have a android tablet I can't wait until this is in appstore

*queen chrystalis looks at the death changlings* (queen chrystalis: how..how..is..that....even..possible) *black twinkle sees the death changelings* well my war comrade chrystalis I have good news and bad news (queen chrystalis: what ?) The good newsis that you are the only changeling alive the bad news is that you where my 2rd army on my battle tommorow.... (queen chrystalis: please dont talk about what shall happen tommorow please !) *queen chrystalis hides against black twinkles back* well I'm doomed now I only have 300 soldiers now for the defence tommorow.... *black twinkle goes to the bunker and gives pinkimena a hug* (queen chrystalis: orks you dont want to know what shall happen tommorow)

Well my critic is that your OC is simple and nice at the Same time but in my opinion the water itself needs a much lighter color Sorry for being a critical pony but I think the water must be much lighter I actually dont see the difference of the water and the magic color

(Queen chrystalis : DONT LET THE ASSASINS RUN !) *the changelings surrounder the two helpless orks* (queen chrystalis: how does it feelto lose ? Mhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha !) *black twinkle looks at the two helpless works* well well I told you equestria shall win son try to defeat the holy pony land !

*black twinkle calls out his war comrade queen chrystalis* Queen chrystalis your Allie is in danger USE YOUR CHANGELINGS !!!! *a black cloud with green and black flags appear* (queen chrystalis: I'll destroy him for you ! Queen crystalis changes herself to zogwort *black twinkle goes inside the leader bunker* Pinkimena ! I'm glad that you still hided in the bunker ! If you did not you where killed ! (Pinkimena: i'm glad your still alive my hero <3) *queen chrystalis orders to Change his changling army into 1000000 space marines* (queen chrystalis: Who is the real loser now 2 ugly orks or my space army ?)

*all grimskulls soldiers go inside rooms* *black twinkle whispers to captain messerschmit* ... captain...close..the..door..of.the..rooms..and.start...the...genocide.... *every ork soldier gets captured in the rooms and is burned to death only zogwort and grim skull remaining* HAHAHAHA did you think it was a normal base ? NO its one of my concentration camps you dumb green smurf ! Why I should hide the elements in a concentration camp ? Oh I forgot something *the unicorn soldiers perish and destroy zogworts staff with black magic* Mhahahahahaha That happens if you dont leave the holy elements alone !

*grim skull find the base* well go inside my camp every ork haves a special room where the elements can be hidden Dont try destroying one brick of the base if you tear the base apart the elements are teared apart too well orks....GO INSIDE A ROOM IF YOU WANT THE ELEMENTS !

*black twinkles voice comes out the pole mic* If you find the camp you can enter the rooms where the elements are hidden ! If you go inside a room wait for me and my wife first before searching the elements *black twinkle gives grim skull and zogwort a map and compass*

*black twinkle and pinkimena go inside the leaderbunker* pshh *black twinkle picks the bunker microphone and commands the army to protect the bunker* *the voice of black star comes from the pole speaker* If you want the cupcakes your army zogwort and you need to find it in my camp in the everfee forest !

The elements can turn everything into stone and rule the universe ...but...only..the.ponies.can..use...it..togheter... *black twinkle holds and kiss pinkimena even tighter* she has killed what you call the horses she is the only one now with the power to find the elements...she made cupcakes and she owns the cupcakes if our eat one you are a element and you can use the jewels to rule he universe and turn things into stone

The elements are 6 jewels And 6 ponies *black twinkle looks to pinkimena* well if you want the elements you need to have the ponies too The ponies are applejack . Twilight sparkle. Fluttershy. Rainbow dash. Rarity .. and my ...honey pinkimena..........*black twinkle holds pinkimena very tight * YOU PUT YOUR CLAWS OF MY LOVE BOSS GRIMSKULL

Haha better loots ? Do you even know the elements of harmony ? *black twinkle laughs on boss grimskulls face* Hahahahahaha you are toooo dumb to know the elements haha *captain messerschmit puts his hoof in black twinkles month* (Captain messerschmit: dont tell the orks about the holy and pure elements !) *black twinkle does a face hoof* Oops I said too much...

Wait a minute *black twinkle comes out his bunker* why exactly are works here in the holy land of equestria ! *black twinkle shoots his luger 8 times in the air* if this is a invasion on equestria IL PROTECT EQUESTRIA UNTIL I DIE ! *black twinkle gives pinkimena a lovely hug* (pinkimena: I wonder how green cupcakes taste ?)

*the unicorns look at grim skull* ...* black twinkle picks up a microphone in the bunker* my soldiers did nothing wrong you can't hear gork and mork because this is the ancient land of Celestia and Luna ! *unicorn soldiers take 3 steps back because they are fraif that grimskull shall rampage of anger*

*black twinkle looks ankwardly to boss grim skull* this is equestria not your planet *black twinkle goes to sugarcube corner to see his wife again* Pinkimena: hey what's that blood on your chest ? Black twinkle: I saved Equestria from some green smurfs Pinkimena: if so why do you look worried honey ? Black twinkle: because the leader wants to kill me now Pinkimena: I shall help protect you my dear <3 Black twinkle: he wants to kill you too so hide in my bunker <3 Pinkimena: okey sweetie I hope that green smurf does not see this *pinkimena kisses black twinkle* Black twinkle: I love you very much my princess Pinkimena: I love you too <3 Black twinkle follow me into my bunker before boss grim skull sees us

I can atleast try it but I'm a earth pony so I'll ask it to somepony who has magic powers *black twinkle asks to his soldiers to use his magic but it fails because no pony haves the power to change a ork* I think you are stuck in Equestria forever...*black twinkle goes to his bunker*

How about that I leave your race alone and I help you to rank up to a phyker ork thanks to unicorn magic and simply go to your planet and leave Equestria alone ? Or you slaughter me into pieces and if you do that you will never go back to your planet ? Your choice sir

*black twinkle looks to the spores and starts thinking* Well you have 2 choices .. Option 1 is killing yourself and I leave your race alone Option 2 is living forever but your race is vanished and burned Do you think ponies do not have power ? *the ground troops who are unicorns use black magic and perishes the ground so nothing can grow* haha green fatty smurf CHOSE A OPTION !