What really bothers me here is that his personality says "Evil" and "Friendly". I don't think those two personality traits should ever be put together. While we're on the subject of personality, I also have to say the personality feels like it's nowhere near complete. Okay, so he's evil... I think we already established that multiple times, why not put some more detail into the personality? What sort of evil things does he do? Why do you have friendly and evil in the same personality? Similar to what I said earlier, it's like you just picked a few random personality traits and called it good without putting any time into it. Putting more work into just the personality may not make the OC perfect by any means, but it will definitely be an improvement
Other than that just work on what the majority of people here have said.