Night Shadow/Daw

Umm k?

KK I'm really bored! Almost let my self in, but I waited...And waited And now I'm in! Who now?

Hey everypony! I want to join as the best Pokemon, since my favorite was chosen, I'll choose her brother! Can I join as Latios?

Fire! Fire! Fire! Have fun trying to put that out my dear friends! Btw, the ship we are firing on, is it Anti pirates or is it pro pirates, because facade gave orders to sink them. :okiedokielokie: And I just fired makeshift napalm on them, so I wasn't sure if they were pirates or hunters. oh well, makes no difference, I'm just a Mercancery, I'll do what ever as long as it comes with a hefty price

Night heard the captains orders, even though he didn't tell him to do anything, he still wanted to help out.... As he galloped below decks to Missklangs quarters, he looked around, seemingly nopony was around and muttered Sorry Missklang, but we've got to sink their ship... Not pulled out Ice Mourne and brought it down as hard as he could on Missklang's door, surprisingly, he thought the door would have had magic wards or what not, but the door splintered. And with a kick, the door cracked open, and Night went in... Night trotted in, the room as pitch black, so he summoned his Frost Core, which lit the room in a dim, blue ominous glow. He picked at the drawers, some locked, some unlocked, but finally found what he was looking for... Missklang.... I knew you were hiding something. But this? You must be hiding many things, for you have a Royal Alchemyst's component box As he found a saddle to tie the Box to him, he galloped up decks, the big box dragging him a tad bit, but now, Night saw the horrendous scene that broke out... His first thoughts were about the safety of the mare, and her fillies, but they were nowhere to be seen. Then he quickly remembered what the captain said. He instinctively pulled out the Oil of Vitriol Carefully poured a few drops on a cannon ball, and almost instantaneously, heard fizzing, he cursed and remembered cannon shot was made from metal, and this was nothing to play with. Night quickly rolled the shot off decks, into the water and hopefully causing no further damage to ship, despite knowing its name, Nignt dubbed, the Relator. He ran back to cannon, where he found Phosphorus, as used a random cloth laying around to smear it around the cannon ball, and loaded it into the cannon. As he lit the fuse, Night quickly ran to the mouth of the cannon, and lights the cannon ball ablaze.. >>>>>BOOOM<<<<< Night watched the flaming shot fly off, hitting the enemy ship and slowly setting it ablaze too. And quietly said Morietur in Incendium, Requiescat in fragmentum... The fire kept burning, as it was almost impossible to put out, as the sticky phosphorous now also stick to the deck of the ship, and the composition is very water tolerant, so in a way, the ship was doomed to die of fire... As Night prepared another shot, this time grapeshot, and quickly fired it on the mast of the enemy, the same results, but this fire spread quite fast, as the mast incinerated to crisp...

so which one? speed up or filler?

I have a question, since we're going to meet at at night, should I just speed time or add filler? Since your visting the artists, and stuff

Ok thanks! I'll try a different position, it's just they sometimes confuse me, but I'll look into that

Could I possible get some critique on one or more of these pieces? http://hankjwimbleton58.deviantart.com/art/Heavy-Infantry-Marshmellow-570663234 http://hankjwimbleton58.deviantart.com/art/Gentlecolt-Night-Shadow-571088393?q=gallery%3Ahankjwimbleton58&qo=0 http://hankjwimbleton58.deviantart.com/art/DuskHeart-Mercenary-570880372?q=gallery%3Ahankjwimbleton58&qo=1 http://hankjwimbleton58.deviantart.com/art/DuskHeart-Shade-Corp-Operative-570805425?q=gallery%3Ahankjwimbleton58&qo=2

As Night straightened his bow tie, Ana fastened his cape, he called for Alpha to see if everything was alright. Alpha came in the room, and dropped down on the ground, laughing W-what? Did I put something on backwards? Alpha why are laughing? Alpha sniffles and replied with a half answer and giggle Well you see, you invited her for lunch correct? Then why are you dressed like that? Yiu dressed up as if it was a Night date, not a afternoon one, ditch the cape, and the hat, get a bowler hat and then you might look decent when he finished talking, Alpha giggled some more and walked out of the room leaving Night inside... Night muttered to himself He then thought of rescheduling the date, to Night, but thought the princess had something to do then, and took the risk, he pulled out a pen and wrote a letter, and sending it, hoping he didn't screw something up... Dear Princess I am afraid I must reschedule our meet up, do you mind moving it back a few hours near dusk? Yours, Night

Thanks! I bet you could do better tho

i have the finished one! which ever one you like! http://hankjwimbleton58.deviantart.com/art/Gentlecolt-Night-Shadow-571088393?ga_submit_new=10%253A1447021959

Hooray! I want to help, and I am a decent voice actor, if you think I can do it, pm me! I look forward to working with you guys on this

And thus Night is bad? I think nit

This is a fast sketch I will make a bigger and more clean one You should draw Electra, we both need the practice, mostly me, but it can't hurt to draw!

I'm drawling it currently, I haven't drawn Night before, so this will be challenging,

Wine is magnificent, you should try some, and yes you said it correctly... Night watched as Missklang interrogated Nova And said to himself Hehe, you guys entertain me... As he had a flashback to his horrid childhood, for some reason and continued his sentence, this time, shouting to the crew that was on the deck ...Who DID THIS?! Answer me, or die by my sword, a lumine lunae Tell me... Who ever it is.... Will have a slow, cold, and painful death... Night raged... After a while he calmed down and asked the mare Quae sunt nomina ?

I'm going to try to draw night in his suit

Hoc Bibere Night said to the scared mare. The mare took the drink (OOC, plz don't hurt me, she isn't a real character, I'm not gmodding) As reluctantly drank it... Yessir! I have your orders, the language was Ancient Latin. I will guard them with my life Night pulled out his sword and said to the mare and her fillies nolite ergo solliciti esse coeperit gladius meus super te... As he stood guard sword in hoof and opened a near by bottle of rum and drank a few sips, and said to thyself I need some good wine, this muck is not for me...

Night got a letter, almost instantaneously, and read it. He quickly jotted down a reply and sent it on its way... Very well, we shall meet at the station Night ran to his brothers collection of Antiques and Artifacts and asked him if he could borrow some clothes... Alpha suddenly assaulted Night with questions Shure! As long as you don't stain them, you know that was the first suit Doctor Hooves tailored, these are irreplaceable, but what are you looking for? Suits ? Robes? Muffin? I-I'll just take that fine looking suit, and I'll be on my way now... Night semi-calmly said Fine by me, just don't stain it, I'd be impossible to get it out, understand?! Night agreed and walked back to his room, holding the suit..

I should have rephrased that, it's not a giant island with a infinite magic buffet and minigun turrets. Now if you want me to have that. I'd be happy to. It is just as an idea, possibly if things turn out bad, we could *hide there, as I'm pretty sure no pony else knows about it, but they could very well stumble upon it

Hope it's ok, that I have a mini hideout cove of the shores of the coast, it has a few cannons and food, nothing else (except for stuff like hay beds and lanterns, etc.)