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marlyly

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  1. Legs too small, body and neck too tall, big flank. For a first attemp, that's practicaly nothing, the first time I tried was far far worse. Keep on practicing and you'll be able to do much better than the model (and more personal).
  2. Why saying "nothing great" when "nearly perfect" would be more accurate. That's some very good job you did there and you even take time to explain how you did it, a big brohoof, and a big bravo.
  3. What I think? I think I just brained my damage ! That's some very good work you did there, proof that gentlemen discord is best discord.
  4. Nice work, my favorites are AJ and Sketchy, who is more cartoon style. You should try to work on the legs, some of them don’t look really “natural”, Bubble’s one even looks like they are broken. It’s not a big deal since the rest is great, and the legs are (for me) the trickiest part. Just watch some episodes and try to really pay attention to the way it’s done, you’ll see that’s not such a big deal.
  5. The creature began to move slowly; just a few steps and it’ll be able to dismember the intruder. It could hear the beating of his heart; fell the warm blood flowing through his vein. The creature quietly raised one of its curved deadly harm and sliced! The blade ended up in the wooden table, the tarot cards were placed in a weird order, forming a circle with one at the dead center, where the blade ended up. “You won’t move until I say so now” said Voyage, sitting on the other edge of the room. “You’re obviously not sophisticated enough to be able to think, maybe you are even brainless, literally, so I guess your master is watching us”. He turned his head, so he knew the creature’s maker could see him face to face. “I don’t know what your business here is but it’s clearly no good. Maybe there’s other way than fighting, come here and talk or you’ll leave me no choice).
  6. Voyage slowly emerges from his sleep. No one attempt to kill him? What a surprise, those necromancers must be very cautions, or just surfing from a lack of experience. He left the back of the shop, and began to work on the dead insect again. He felt that even dead, the creature still had a link with its maker, that’s the problem with necromancers they are working with corpses so often they don’t even realize when the body is so damaged that it’s good for nothing. He looked at the window, the moon was red: many had died during his sleep. “That’s enough” Voyage took his card, using all major arcanas at one, and teleporting him directly to the source of the dark powers. He ended up in an empty room, he didn’t know if it was a laboratory or a torture room. A lot of dismembered corpses were lying on the floor, but no sign of a living necromancer. “Back to the starting point, I’d better leave….. What!” He saw a crystal on a table, and a tarot game. “Finally I think I’ll wait”. A necromancer playing the game, playing the game with his rule, things was getting interesting. As he began to look at the cards, without touching them, Voyage didn’t notice the movement in the pile of corpses.
  7. “What a beautiful monstrosity” Said Voyage as he extracted the dead artificial insect from the body. “Now, tell me all about you” He began to analyze the creature, memorize the aura of the magic that created it, tried to locate the maker. “AH !!!!” He felt a rush of power inside of him and remembered, he used his powers without the card to call the dragon. The link due to their species allowed him to do it with ease, but he was still paying the price for using his magic without control tools. He even had to completly rewrite some events, making that the captain near the interogation room never heard him. He went to the back of the shop, locked the door and whispered some words in a language as ancient as the word, and fell in a sick sleep. (That’s my way to say I’m going to sleep, sory that’s French timeline, I’ll be back ASAP, maybe 6 or 7 hours, I know it's not fair play due to your last post harmonic, but I need to be up at 7am and it's allready 2am).
  8. “You know it’s not right, don’t you?” said Voyage to the captain. “I’m sorry but orders were precise, we have to imprisoned you and keep you away from your cards” “Let’s make a deal, you let me go with my card, and go easy on you ok ?” “Keep dreaming you craz ….” As the captain was talking, Voyage violently pushed the card holding his cards, they all felt. Each cart represented 22 possibilities, each combination, each placement on the floor, made of it infinity of possibilities, an infinity of future. Voyage only had to choose the situation that could help him. He chose something simple, the wooden floor began to make noise, and all the guards began to fell in holes due to unusual weak spots on the flood. It was even funny. As the rope around him began to disappear (due to its poor quality), Voyage began to laugh. He had to admit that was a funny trick. He made his way back to the interrogation room, “randomly walking in the corridors and “luckily” avoiding all the patrols, and found what he wanted. The mutated body. He brought it back to his shop, puted some protective spell to not be bothered, and began the autopsy. “Soon, soon, I’ll find you no matter who you are”.
  9. Sometime, an instant can pass like an eternity; it was one of those moments. Voyage was tied up, without magic, the guy in front of haw was gonna die and he’ll have to keep the memories of his death he couldn’t avoid until the rest of his “life”. And the only thing that came to his mind was that the gods, if they did exist, was playing him a very bad trick. To all of the dragons in Equestria, he had to find the one that hated his kind. He began to laugh, and said as he was looking at the roof: “Challenge accepted”. He felt down on the mutating guard’s blood, put his hooves on it, and then roll to the disgusting beast and trace a fire rune on him, using his own blood. “EXPLODE !” The guard was saved, the beast destroyed, but still so much to be done. Captain, would you be kind to untied me ?
  10. 3 sec, after this duration the time line was getting harder to read for Voyage. He just had 3 sec to find a way to save the guard facing him from the creature behind and he didn’t even know what was gonna happen. “I’m gonna regret it” he thought to himself. Then he emptied his spirit, so that for him the second became minutes, as his concentration reached his pick he felt a spirit near from his one. A spirit he had a natural link with, a dragon spirit. 2 seconds. He opened his eyes and shouted with his voice and mind to the unknown dragon near from him. “HELP ME BROTHER !!!”
  11. "Give them back" said Voyage "Why, one of our mens heard you wispering about those cards, why are they so important ?, not to mension you helped this necromancer back there". "All I can tell you is that there's a bug it the brain of the guard behind me, and if you dont give me my cards right now, well, let say you wont be able to ask me those stupid questions any more". As he was speacking, the guard behind him began to moove in a weird and colvulsive way.
  12. Destiny is written, it's like an unlimited scroll that can be read by those who know. But landing his hooves on this scroll allways create a loud sond in the void, ridles on the water surface. Even in the heart of the action, Voyage was able to fell it. "There's another player, I'll hate to take care of this too." He now had a new direction to follow.
  13. Voyage wasn’t able to grab his cards he had to think fast. “Hey” he whispered to the necromancer, I can help you if you act fast. Put your horn on my cards and think about a safe place, I’ll teleport us. "What" ? "We're runing out of time, I just reinforced your magic wall, we're in the same boat so thrust me"
  14. The magic ethereal trail leads Voyage to a street where guards were trying to restrain a magic wall. “Stay away” he yelled. “Sir this is Canterlot’s guard’s business and you shouldn’t ….” As the guard was answering, Voyage touched the magic wall. He didn’t try to dispel it, but quietly and slowly analyze the essence of the caster, he easily felt it, not that far and casting another spell. A spell that could easily slain half of the guards. He took his decision, he teleport himself near from the dark caster, and reinforce the magic wall using a earth rune. The guards should stay away, and this pitiful necromancer should flee. But two guard interupted him.
  15. Voyage was sitting in the back of his shop, like every night. He took a deep breath, and began to shuffle his cards. He thought that nothing was going to happen, that the card will remain silent like they were during the last 20 years. He was wrong. As his hooves touched the deck one of the cards felt down on the floor, Voyage looked at it, it was the Magician. A symbol of beginning, and great power. He decided to open his spirit to the magic, he only let him flow half a second and already felt major magic spells used in the capital. He could easily felt the dark nature of the magic in state, a disgusting aura he hasn’t felt for centuries, but that he wasn’t able to spot precisely: necromancy. “Time for some old school investigation” he said to himself. One of those auras was melting with the light aura of a royal guard, apparently struggling with magic, making it easy to locate. Voyage grabbed his tarot, left the shop, and aimed for this direction.
  16. Happy you like it, it was chalenging and fun to do it. Personaly she reminds me of "Bayonetta" if you know her, mostly due to the fantasy haircut.
  17. And you'll find it by practicing again and again, that's the spirit Nice Fluttershy! I also tried to look at your DA account but I cant reach it, some help ?
  18. You made this with an IPAD . Now I'm realy impressed. It's seems like it's an unprecise tool, but nage to give a good result. Have you ever considered basic (but omigad soooooo good) hand drawing ?
  19. Watching this rise a question (good job with the drawings by the way). What's the rule of ponysonas ? Are they supose to copy the physical atributes of the drawer, or represent him more mentaly (kinda like a persona)? Ps: what tool did you used for this drawing ?
  20. I had a busy day (most occupied by the making of this drawing to be honest) and here it's done. As I said before I realy suck at drawing human beings, so fell free to ask someone else, Ill totaly understand. ps: you didn't ask any backkground so I did nothing, and if you want it with a special size just ask for it.
  21. I had so much things planned for today. Post on MLP forum (best way to begin a week-end). Finally write a proper presentation for my DA account. Go outside and make a snow angel. Draw one or two cards of my MLP tarot. Read the “Fables de La Fontaine”. Do my home works during the spare time. Try to communicate with the great Cthulhu (that’s how I call taking a nap). Rush the thieves’ guild on Skyrim. SNOW FIGHT !!!!!! MORE SNOW FIGHT !!!!!! SLED !!!!! EVEN MORE SNOW FIGHT !!!!!!!!!!! How the day really began. I answered to this post: http://mlpforums.com/topic/46347-can-someone-humanize-my-oc/#entry1095777 What I finally did: Turned a pony into a hot chick while hearing some of Bayoneta’s OST. Helped a friend beating a dark souls boss. And you know what? As long as I helped I’m happy. Thing I learned today: Nothing is heavier than a secret, women can hardly keep it, and I know for this a lot of men that are womens.
  22. I had so much things planned for today. Post on MLP forum (best way to begin a week-end). Finally write a proper presentation for my DA account. Go outside and make a snow angel. Draw one or two cards of my MLP tarot. Read the “Fables de La Fontaine”. Do my home works during the spare time. Try to communicate with the great Cthulhu (that’s how I call taking a nap). Rush the thieves’ guild on Skyrim. SNOW FIGHT !!!!!! MORE SNOW FIGHT !!!!!! SLED !!!!! EVEN MORE SNOW FIGHT !!!!!!!!!!! How the day really began. I answered to this post: http://mlpforums.com/topic/46347-can-someone-humanize-my-oc/#entry1095777 What I finally did: Turned a pony into a hot chick while hearing some of Bayoneta’s OST. Helped a friend beating a dark souls boss. And you know what? As long as I helped I’m happy. Thing I learned today: Nothing is heavier than a secret, women can hardly keep it, and I know for this a lot of men that are womens.
  23. I dont have any either, but I still try, and now I can give peoples what they wants (more or less). Give it a try too and request after request, you'll end up better at it.
  24. You know what ? I HATE drawing human being, mostly because I suck at it and also because I dont find it as fun as furry or ponies. But I'll still give it a try. What kind of dress do you want her to wear ?
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