Synthesis

[Znex 936]

If you've been on chat, you may or may not have heard about my fanfic I'm making. I'm not finished with the first chapter yet, but I'm terribly close and so I'm posting this thread in preparation. The link can be found here, but as of this moment it is locked. However to satiate your appetites, I will provide the basic overview here as a teaser:

 

After reluctantly volunteering to play-test for a new "virtual reality" pony MMO, a young man is violently ripped from the universe and thrown into Equestria. When he awakens as a pony within the mysterious Everfree Forest, he soon finds that the only way to get back to Earth is to engage on a quest to the legendary wizard Starswirl the Bearded, who supposedly lies asleep somewhere in the Frozen North.

 

Though there remain some unanswered questions for this guy - who threw him into Equestria, and why? Who are all these multicoloured pastel ponies with odd names? What is this place, filled with so many wonders? And who is the eccentric unicorn who lives beneath the Everfree Forest with his numberless gadgets?

 

In the meantime, I am looking for prereaders to check on the quality of my work when it is finished. If anyone is interested, then do feel free to pm me with your offer (and a description of past experience would be helpful too but not necessary ).

[Klopp 2,050]

Looking for pre-readers, eh? In that case, I must throw this thread on over to Art Discussion.

[Znex 936]

Thanks Klopp

 

Alright, I'm done with the first chapter/prologue. Anyone fancying a read?

Edited April 19, 2012 by Znex