Don't Know About Me (Vocal) - the Phony Brony

[PhonyBrony 275]

This is basically done but I want feedback from a smaller community. I'm also waiting for a graphic (Already covered, though. I think.). I know a lot people don't like vocal processing, so I didn't do as much autotuning or anything; Mainly a little vocoding and a lot of normalizing. So what do yall think?

 

Verse 1:

 

I'm just a baby

But I have faith here

My heart is silent

But I don't care

 

'Cause I

I need to travel

to another land

Where I hope to find out

Who I am

 

The sun is setting

but it's not over

My heart is aching

But I must go

 

I wanted answers

And still I could ask more

What I am here for

I just don't know.

 

 

---Chorus:

Where

Am I from

Where is my destiny?

And What

What am I

Without my history?

 

Who

Should I find

Who can- set me- free?

And Why

of all things

I don't know about me?

---Chorus end

 

Verse 2:

 

I've spent long hours

trying to understand

Though nothing's worked

I had to try

 

Since my memories

are nothing worthwhile

I never kept them

I dunno why.

 

But I am empty

Without where I come from

It's getting worse

Can't take no more.

 

So I am going

I've made up my mind

I shed more tears than I have

Before.

 

-Chorus x2-

Edited March 22, 2012 by PhonyBrony

[Mogul Dash 31]

Oh wow you make music to ^^ Subscribed. I love the song to, keep up the awesome vocal work.

[PhonyBrony 275]

Oh wow you make music to ^^ Subscribed. I love the song to, keep up the awesome vocal work.

 

Yay!

Thanks! Haha I don't normally do vocals but they're fun! Especially when you get to say "I wrote, performed, and edited everything!"

 

Plus, 250+subscribers! 1/1000000 of the way there!

 

----3/22/12----

Okay, I uploaded a listed version.

 

What do you guys think? I mean the first vocal with ME... I bet it's gonna suck

[The Milkman 186]

Keep it up, that's awesome.

[PeachPalette 1,000]

This is so adorable! <3 Great work!!!

[Warbalist 133]

This is wonderful. All your melodies are so catchy.

[Coconeru 355]

Very nice work hehe I wish I could write catchy songs, mine just tend to be sad or dramatic hehe.