writing Kidnapped for Romance Pony Or human?

[TechiePidge 64]

Im debating on wither or not my story, Kidnapped for Romance should be a pony story with OCS or a human story.

 

In the pony version, a new type of pony, a 'Demon' like species of ponies will be introduced.

I will give you more info if you ask.

 

However!

 

If I do A human version, the beginning will be entirely different as well as basic events, but the plot line will be entirely the same.

 

For more info on the story please ask me, and Ill feel free to explain.

 

Preview of the Ponifyed version-

 

Hoofs clacked against the hard cobble roads as a young mare made her way through a small everfree forest village. More hoofs clacked on the cobble behind her as guards made their way after her, the young mare was on the run, that was for sure. She was stalking a mare who had gotten in the way of plans…apparently she was busted nearly killing the young mare by some passerby guards on break. “Dammit….” she cursed as she turned into an alleyway and quickly jumped in a dumpster before the guards could turn the corner. She held her breath as the guards made their way past the dumpster and out the other end of the alleyway. Making sure the guards have fully left, she leaps out of the dumpster and races down the way she came.

 

 

Preview of the Human version-

 

A young female stares out at a small crowd of gathered people from a alleyway. These people were gasping, crying, and grieving over a dead woman, but not the female in the alleyway. She had done what she needed, and she had been trained not to feel emotions, she had done it. A quick slice to the heart as ordered by her master. Turning back down the alleyway the young girl absconds into the darkness and runs strait into the back wall of the alleyway, disappearing into it. On the other side of that wall however, was a dark world, the sun never showed here, houses here were tents and the occasional shack. It was hell itself.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

I kinda have the feeling this is gonna be one of them dark romance stories...