Pokemon Fan Fic I wrote when I was 13

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https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7309626/1/The-Secret-Admirer

 

So, when I was 13, I was so into Pokemon that I wrote this fanfiction. Looking back on it, there were some funny bits, but it was mostly just cheesy and a bit mean spirited. So guys, check it out especially if you're a fan of the Pokemon anime.

[Cyan Blue 946]

"I don't own pokemon because If I did I would totally air this fic"

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"I don't own pokemon because If I did I would totally air this fic"

Yeah, I thought I was the best writer in the world at the time and wanted shipping I liked to be cannon. Nowadays, I would never air this

[Stellafera 3,836]

So my familiarity with Pokemon is something along the lines of "there's something called Team Rocket and they blast off", but hey, I'm sure that you won't mind a little roasting if you decided to show this to the forum. 

 

That being said, the comedy in this is fun. I expected something terribad from the title, but actually, I found it pretty enjoyable.

 

Imagine what our kids would look like. They would look weird, but who needs kids anyway?

my heart flutters

 

She started asking Pokemon, but they had no idea of a love letter

 

Chikoirita's a pioneer in the field. 

 

That's exactly what I said last chapter

 

You are not going Deadpool on us. 

 

She had never talked to Cyndaquil much except when she was alone with him in a cave looking for Totodile and a beach ball. 

 

Yes?

 

Chikorita then slapped Cyndaquil with her vine

 

 

We better take him to the Pokemon center where Nurse Joy will give him a shot with a sharp needle

 

I found the equal and opposite force to tact and it is Ash Ketchum.

 

"I guess he's fine,"  said Ash. He went back to eating his cookies.

 

Ash, are you burnt out on the world already?

 

Cyndaquil kept doing stuff to make Chikorita like him like give him flowers-

 

No wonder why you're failing, you're extorting her for flowers!

 

-tell her jokes, tell her cheesy pick up lines, and try to be brave

 

you're in a peaceful empty grassy field

I really want to see how that turned out

 

"You got me a hot air balloon ride! Wasn't it expensive?"

 

does everyone here just hop inside hot air balloons with their obsessive admirers despite rejecting all of their previous advances

 

"It was a fair price"

 

there is so much I want to see here

like how somebody who can only say "Cyndaquil" rented a hot air balloon 

 

"For a desperate guy he's kinda cool I think, real sweet"

 

so that's how you win them over

 

She turned to Cyndaquil and slapped him so hard he fell out of the basket and landed right into a shallow lake

 

DID SHE JUST KILL HIM

 

"Look I'm sorry I don't know what came over me"

 

no worries everyone has those moments where they black out and assault the person standing next to them

 

"You'll like me someday"

 

and you're dangerously delusional, so the circle is complete

 

Chikorita picked up her flowers to Ash and went to look for him

 

Shouldn't that hot air balloon ride take her a bit of a way's away from her flower arrangement? Dedication.

[Castle Bleck 19,453]

First Chikorita, then Latias?

 

[Moved to Elsewhere 11,331]

So my familiarity with Pokemon is something along the lines of "there's something called Team Rocket and they blast off", but hey, I'm sure that you won't mind a little roasting if you decided to show this to the forum. 

 

That being said, the comedy in this is fun. I expected something terribad from the title, but actually, I found it pretty enjoyable.

 

my heart flutters

 

 

Chikoirita's a pioneer in the field. 

 

 

You are not going Deadpool on us. 

 

 

Yes?

 

 

 

 

I found the equal and opposite force to tact and it is Ash Ketchum.

 

 

Ash, are you burnt out on the world already?

 

 

No wonder why you're failing, you're extorting her for flowers!

 

 

you're in a peaceful empty grassy field

I really want to see how that turned out

 

 

does everyone here just hop inside hot air balloons with their obsessive admirers despite rejecting all of their previous advances

 

 

there is so much I want to see here

like how somebody who can only say "Cyndaquil" rented a hot air balloon 

 

 

so that's how you win them over

 

 

DID SHE JUST KILL HIM

 

 

no worries everyone has those moments where they black out and assault the person standing next to them

 

 

and you're dangerously delusional, so the circle is complete

 

 

Shouldn't that hot air balloon ride take her a bit of a way's away from her flower arrangement? Dedication.

Lol nice commentary and the funny thing is, I didn't even know who Deadpool was at the time of writing this

First Chikorita, then Latias?

 

For some reason Ash really attracts Pokemon. Surprisingly, he hasn't caught them all.