Review my OC

[SuperBrony87 506]

This is my OC concept... ROUGH! but Review my OC please?

 

 HERE BE DRAGONS!!!

 

    Komoto Krawkis is an anthropomorphic hybrid creature with traits of the komodo dragon and the crocodile. He stands at a monstrous 6'7 feet and weighs 300 lbs. Despite his natural size and strength. The cold blooded monster is a gentle giant wanting more to make love not war... Although, the dragon in him loves a good fight on occasion... Keeps you from getting soft, keeps upstarts from taking your crown and takes care of troublesome marauders.

 

   His days could be spent lounging down by the beach and soaking up the sun's rays. Taking leisurely swims in the river... The crocodile in him loves to get wet n wild. I mean who doesn't love a good dip in the pool? He also enjoys a delicious steak dinner and romancing the local females.

 

   A self proclaimed romantic, all the beach females barely can resist his machismo charm and his bravery as on occasion an upstart will forget his place and will need to be reminded who is king of the beach. He's at the prime of his life... None stand a chance. He maintains order as he will settle disputes in the group, meal time squabbles and fiercely defend the beach from intruders and marauders of "Anthro Island"...

 

Gender-Male

Sex-Heterosexual

Age-27

 

APPEARANCE

 

Hair-Black

Eyes-Blue

Skin-Blue Gray or Blue Green

 

PERSONALITY

 

Strong

Intelligent

Romantic

Dramatic

Handsome... Is Handsome a Personality???

Protective

Brave

A Vicious Fighter

A Killer

Cold Blooded but Not Cold Hearted

 

Post included is a rough draft drawing of my OC and is in first concept stage - unfinished.

 

   This has been SuperBrony87 and I hope you all like it?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Astral Blitzen 469]

I'm not busy so could I give you a review. This might be very short compare to my other reviews

 

Astral Blitzen

Astral looks very good! Just some minor changes and she would look great. Normally cutie marks match the pony color palette somehow. So I think the collar should be blue. Her eyes color should not match her mane. Here are some alternative recommended eyes colors(will be in hex code) b89345/b85a45/a4b845 any of those should work pretty well

Overall 7.9 out of 10

 

I'm saving the other pony to review on my own forum!

Yeah, ok >.>. I like her eyes as they are

[Jeric 46,851]

Attention All

 

I hid quite a few unneeded comments in here. A request for critique is not the place for a petty argument.

 

Also I feel that it is important to state this. If you offer anything up for critique, you should expect and hope for honest opinions ... not just positive ones. As long as said opinion maintains specific reasons for it and is not actually abusive it is acceptable. The only way we can improve as artists in our respective crafts is to hear what we don't want to. 

[SuperBrony87 506]

This is my OC concept... ROUGH! but Review my OC please?

 

 HERE BE DRAGONS!!!

 

    Komoto Krawkis is an anthropomorphic hybrid creature with traits of the komodo dragon and the crocodile. He stands at a monstrous 6'7 feet and weighs 300 lbs. Despite his natural size and strength. The cold blooded monster is a gentle giant wanting more to make love not war... Although, the dragon in him loves a good fight on occasion... Keeps you from getting soft, keeps upstarts from taking your crown and takes care of troublesome marauders.

 

   His days could be spent lounging down by the beach and soaking up the sun's rays. Taking leisurely swims in the river... The crocodile in him loves to get wet n wild. I mean who doesn't love a good dip in the pool? He also enjoys a delicious steak dinner and romancing the local females.

 

   A self proclaimed romantic, all the beach females barely can resist his machismo charm and his bravery as on occasion an upstart will forget his place and will need to be reminded who is king of the beach. He's at the prime of his life... None stand a chance. He maintains order as he will settle disputes in the group, meal time squabbles and fiercely defend the beach from intruders and marauders of "Anthro Island"...

 

Gender-Male

Sex-Heterosexual

Age-27

 

APPEARANCE

 

Hair-Black

Eyes-Blue

Skin-Blue Gray or Blue Green

 

PERSONALITY

 

Strong

Intelligent

Romantic

Dramatic

Handsome... Is Handsome a Personality???

Protective

Brave

A Vicious Fighter

A Killer

Cold Blooded but Not Cold Hearted

 

Post included is a rough draft drawing of my OC and is in first concept stage - unfinished.

 

   This has been SuperBrony87 and I hope you all like it?

Here's The finished version every pony... Enjoy the colors