writing The girl whit the pink jacked remake

[Summer Breeze 2,528]

Hello

If you ever go on a walk around a frorest on a windy, cloudy evening, you may see a girl with a pink jacket and pink shoes. The wind is playing with her goldish brown hair and she has white earplugs. It looks like she is going somewhere and her eyes are dreamy. When you come closer to her, it will look like she does not see you. But when you have come realy close, she smiles and waves to you. If you greet her, you can go on with your life and forget the girl you saw in the forest. But if you don't want to greet her... Let me tell you something you don't know about the girl, she is listening rock music, she is not going anywhere and if you don't greet her, bad things will happen and you would whish you greeted her that windy, cloudy evening. This girl does realy exist and I know that not because I met her... or maybe I have. I know she exist because I am that girl.

This is the beginning of my thriller called the girl whit the pink jacked. I am dutch so maybe there are some mistakes but my friend helped me whit the translation and she is really good in english. When i have made an other part of the story i will upload it here

This is the biginning but the story is about a girl calles jade and she hears this story. She want to know who the girl is and if she realy can make things happen. But while she is comming closer to the truth, bad things happen to her familly. If jade realy want to know the truth she might has to sacrifice everything.

Edited May 13, 2015 by summer breze

[LittleMac 3,085]

This sounds awesome

Can't wait for the full version

Edited May 13, 2015 by LittleMac

[Summer Breeze 2,528]

Tnx little mac im making chapter one now and i'll upload it as soon as possible