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[AmbientBeat 27]

I need feedback on my dude, Ambient Beat, cause people call him names like edgey and autistic because it's black. Which I don't get, cause AB isn't edgy. Here's the backstory: AB grew up a ladies man, getting all the mares after finishing DJ sets, until things took a turn when he had to pay child support and had to take care of many fillies and went bankrupt and had his house foreclosed, having to go on welfare and being called lazy as a result. He plans to get his life back together by working two part time jobs and has an active relationship and lives with Twilight Sparkle. He appears in the episodes, you can't see him cause he's jet black, sitting in the shadows, watching the protagonists. Even when there isnt a shady spot in the background he hides under an object that's black, he just curls up right in there(he's very flexible).

Okay I'm joking, my dude's story is that he grew up near Applewood and moved to a place near the pony Seattle and makes tunes(which is my simplified life story). AB is black and has green hair and eyes, which isn't because he's edgy, it's because the character started out as the main protagonist for a ponified GTA clone and the main character was supposed to be a ponified Claude from GTA 3, but I just loved the look so I adopted it for my dude, and the game itself slowly turned into its own thing which probably won't be made cause I can't program. I need feedback to see whether my dude is complex enough or nah

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

@@AmbientBeat,

 

 

 

AB grew up a ladies man, getting all the mares after finishing DJ sets, until things took a turn when he had to pay child support and had to take care of many fillies and went bankrupt and had his house foreclosed, having to go on welfare and being called lazy as a result. He plans to get his life back together by working two part time jobs and has an active relationship and lives with Twilight Sparkle. He appears in the episodes, you can't see him cause he's jet black, sitting in the shadows, watching the protagonists. Even when there isnt a shady spot in the background he hides under an object that's black, he just curls up right in there(he's very flexible).

 

 

 

Okay I'm joking

 

Hoo, don't scare me like that.

 

Anyways, a picture, character link, and a more detailed background would be better if you wish for a more detailed OC examination. But all I can say for now is add more stuff.

[Concerned Bystander 2,902]

If you're intending to use him for roleplay then don't worry too much about how complicated his backstory is.  It's better to let his past come out organically through the roleplay itself rather than to have so much of it etched in stone that it limits what you can do with the character.