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Demirari

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Well, other than some grammar errors and a minor typo on either the first or second line, it's ok

 

 

 

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someone keep the rp alive


2 references and 1 obscure half reference in the latest post. spot em all!

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Oh yes. They will be best friends forever. hey guys say your current time in you next post , i want an idea of your time zones, its 12.52pm now.

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@@Demirari,

 

I EDITED MY POST RIGHT BEFORE YOU POSTED, could you read it and make some changes to your last post? Should make at least a little change. .-.

 

I changed the order of when the scores of dark magic beams hit the creature. Aside from that, everything else remained the same. 

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