Feedback for a noir fic idea

[yisetab28 89]

Basically, the story is about Bon Bon going back into her work in the agency she worked in some time ago. Instead of hunting monsters though, they assume a more "passive" vigilante role, in the same style as Person of Interest of Minority Report. They're using reverse-engineered cutie maps scattered across Equestria to analyze situations and see possibility of someone commiting a crime.

 

The working title should be New Harmony, but I'm kind of afraid some people just skip over it and consider it yet another alternate elements fic. For now, I'm just wondering what you guys thought of the idea, and if you would read this fic.

[AmbientBeat 27]

Sounds like something that'd use a lot of dialogue. I'd read it.