Once Upon A Time - First song of Five in GuyWithAmp's new album, Nightfall.

[GuyWithAmp 0]

Hey all! I'm currently in the process of making a new album by the name of "Nightfall", and I want to hear what your opinions are.

 

Currently, I only have the first song, "Once Upon A Time", complete, but I will release the other four when the entire album is complete.

 

https://pony.fm/tracks/21518-once-upon-a-time-nightfall-guywithamp

 

Here is the album description:

 

 

Once upon a time, in the magical land of equestria…

A mare by the name of Nightmare Moon had just been banished to the moon, after her attempted usurping of the Equestrian throne.
With no Luna to conspire with, she is truly alone.
Over time, she begins to think:
“Could it really be that bad?”
She returns from the moon and makes some friends.
Celestia, however, is afraid that she is just attempt to trick her into thinking that she had changed.
Celestia locks her up until she can find proof that she truly has changed.
“I have changed, but have you?”
Angered by Celestia’s actions, she unleashes a storm of magic and breaks out of prison.

…

…

…

“What have I done?”

 

Also, I am excluding the event's of the IDW comics from the album's story. I love the comics, but they kinda mess up the story that I have.

 

Ideas? Critique? Demands?

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

Hm, tbh, it kinda sounds a little too close to the actual show style...