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Lunarpalette

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@Cloggedone

Yeah. This story was actually inspired by a dream I had a couple of nights ago. It's in the AK Yearling writing resources section if you are interested is seeing the plot summary. Imma be adding a whole lot more when I actually write the story.

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The use of dark color surrounding discord, to show his "evilness" is pretty neat, I like it. 

Some more background details could be done on the character's side to really reinforce that difference in sides, but! It seems like it would be an interesting grab & cover for the story! I'd love to find out why the character is fighting discord :)

 

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"Don't hide behind the shadows of others come out and forge your own destiny."

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