Anyone up to read part of my Novel?

[Chevette 1,052]

I have been very unsure of posting my novel here but I decided I should. I'll start off with a short explication/update of my Novel.

As of January 18th 2012 I began to write a story, it was basically just a flash like; "Bored.... nothing to do in class.... OH I KNOW... I'll write a book". So that's what I did, I didn't think to much of it at the time nor did I expect it to have a decent storyline to it at all considering I have never wrote a novel nor thought of writing a novel. It became quite the talk around school though, I tend to get people asking about it each day. Many think i have accomplished quite a feat already with my 37,500+ words and 114 pages.

The current estimation summary is 100,000+ words with near 25 chapters which would be around 480 pages.

 

For those who may be interested in taking a look at my novel so far he'res a short description of what it's about: The story takes place in 1977 where series of small crimes occur in this small country town out in the middle of nowhere, it falls on these two police officers who seem to get involved in attempting to figure out whats going on when all else fails. They run in to other adventures along the way of solving the actual crime group who is causing the trouble.

I personally think it'd make a better movie than a book but you got to start somewhere. The story is full of guns, cars, action, and other stuff like that. If you like that stuff you might want to read it!

 

I hope nobody here of all places would attempt to steal the story, I figured I wouldn't have to worry much about that here since people post a lot of their original writing here.

 

Here's the cover again to draw your interest!

 

Here's the first full 6 chapters of my novel (NOTE: It is obviously unfinished!) It consists of 114 pages and 37,500+ words. Critiques and comments are VERY welcome, I am learning here and I would appreciate any kind of constructive criticism!

Country Mile.pdf

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

I'll check this out, but it may take a bit

[Chevette 1,052]

I'll check this out, but it may take a bit

 

Thanks for your interest, please don't hesitate to take as much time as you need, i'm in no hurry i'm just glad that i'll finally get feedback on it in a few weeks by a good variety of people.

[Cain 24]

I might too.

Although I was mislead by the picture, because as it was loading I thought it was going to be a Fallout Equestria story xD

[Chevette 1,052]

I might too.

Although I was mislead by the picture, because as it was loading I thought it was going to be a Fallout Equestria story xD

 

Thanks for your interest in possibly taking a look at my story, hope you decide to read it!