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DylanKLJ OC finished :)


Rudehamster

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Sweet, i like it!

 

The nose is a little to small but that is pretty much everything i can find!

 

Noted, next time I will improve further!

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Well, lets be honest, the drawing is cool but a little critique:

Eyes: why are there shadows above them? 0-o

Head: I think you made it too big for the pony's body.

Neck: I can't really understand where is the end of the pony's body and start of it's neck.

Hind legs: are too short, next time you're drawing a sitting pony, consider making the hind legs a bit longer and less square-shaped.

I hope this will help you to improve your art skills :)

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Well, lets be honest, the drawing is cool but a little critique:

Eyes: why are there shadows above them? 0-o

Head: I think you made it too big for the pony's body.

Neck: I can't really understand where is the end of the pony's body and start of it's neck.

Hind legs: are too short, next time you're drawing a sitting pony, consider making the hind legs a bit longer and less square-shaped.

I hope this will help you to improve your art skills :)

 

The shadows above the eyes are supposed to be eye brows with a little indentation where the socket is, as the for the rest, you are absolutely correct, this is my first drawing of a sitting pony, and I will try to improve on every area you mentioned in the future. Thank you for your critiques, and they will most definitely help me improve :)

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