request Can someone help redesign this MLP OC?

[CutieMarkCrusaders1 13]

here it is. im gonna be shocked if this edit will be good

species is uni 

please fix this oc

 

[Splashee 28,563]

@CutieMarkCrusaders1

Moved your thread to Requestria.

[CutieMarkCrusaders1 13]

ok! sorry for the mistake

[Neoeryn 196]

I'm kinda busy atm, but I'll definitely try to give it a shot soon!

[Sparkly sparks 512]

1 hour ago, CutieMarkCrusaders1 said:

here it is. im gonna be shocked if this edit will be good

species is uni 

please fix this oc

 

Is this ok? 

its kinda low effort and a bit messy here and there

looks better if you zoom out a bit

@CutieMarkCrusaders1

Edited April 17, 2021 by Sparkly sparks

[CutieMarkCrusaders1 13]

the mark is so good and  the tail and mane is so neat!

[Pandora 38,015]

2 hours ago, CutieMarkCrusaders1 said:

here it is. im gonna be shocked if this edit will be good

species is uni 

please fix this oc

 

I could try giving it a shot tomorrow aswell if you don’t mind 

[Gaines 1,220]

8 hours ago, CutieMarkCrusaders1 said:

Tried a hoof at this 

[CutieMarkCrusaders1 13]

11 hours ago, Gaines said:

Tried a hoof at this 

noice.

[CutieMarkCrusaders1 13]

On 2021-04-17 at 4:33 PM, Pandora said:

I could try giving it a shot tomorrow aswell if you don’t mind 

seems good!