offering critique Silky's Beauty Spa (OC creation and re-designing)

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

Sugar Blossom sneakily took a mint from the bowl nearby, it was probably free anyway, but for some reason she felt sneaky about it, she popped it into her mouth and ate it.

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

@ZiggWheelsManning I'm not quite sure how to fix skateboards of model them but can you show me a sample of what exactly you'd like done to your skateboard? I'm sure I know someone who can assist with it.

*suddenly looks at @Stellar Cresentmoon* You ... do realize it's not stealing if it's free, right? *she'd giggle playfully, she was just kidding based on the shyness of taking one* <3

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[Ghostie boi 287]

34 minutes ago, Princess Silky said:

"I feel terribly bad that you you lovelies have to wait." She begins placing face masks and eye cucumbers for those those in the waiting room. "Try not to get into mischief." She looks to Silvermoon, "And don't try to eat the cucumbers." She'd giggle. 
@Ghostie boi @Shiny Silvermoon
 

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"...Why do ponies but these on their eye's again ?" He'd ask confused but also curious at his own question.

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

Moments ago, Ghostie boi said:

"...Why do ponies but these on their eye's again ?" He'd ask confused but also curious at his own question.

"usually we eat them. But it's good for dark circles, too. What brings you here to the spa. Are you looking to change anything, lovely?"

[Ghostie boi 287]

4 minutes ago, Princess Silky said:

"usually we eat them. But it's good for dark circles, too. What brings you here to the spa. Are you looking to change anything, lovely?"

"Huh... Well I just was hoping to relax a bit due to... Well Something I'm able to do but it's painful on my entire body"

(AKA, Just hoping to make and create a Official look for his Spectral veil state ^^;)

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

3 minutes ago, Ghostie boi said:

"Huh... Well I just was hoping to relax a bit due to... Well Something I'm able to do but it's painful on my entire body"

(AKA, Just hoping to make and create a Official look for his Spectral veil state ^^;)

Ooc: do you have a certain idea of what that looks like? Google references etc? 

[ZiggWheelsManning 10,297]

9 minutes ago, Princess Silky said:

@ZiggWheelsManning I'm not quite sure how to fix skateboards of model them but can you show me a sample of what exactly you'd like done to your skateboard? I'm sure I know someone who can assist with it.

*suddenly looks at @Stellar Cresentmoon* You ... do realize it's not stealing if it's free, right? *she'd giggle playfully, she was just kidding based on the shyness of taking one* <3

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Do you mean shape of the skateboard?  Being the top of it?  You need help with the vertical lines to design it?  Who's the user who can assist with it?  

[Ghostie boi 287]

12 minutes ago, Princess Silky said:

Ooc: do you have a certain idea of what that looks like? Google references etc? 

Ooc: Somewhat, Like I know I want his white fur to be blue, and blue marking's be black. Along with his fur having some Electric/Flame like quality's to it but that's about it. also I do have a Reference also sowwy if it's hard ;^;

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Princess Silky Sugar Blossom  looked at herself, "Uh, Silky? Not to be rude or anything, but I think I've been color swapped!" she chirped, flapping her now blue wings. She giggled, Silky was probably just tired! It's a small mistake!

(OOC: Can I just say that the swapped palette just looks SO much like G1 Wind Whistler and I think it's funny?)  

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

1 hour ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Princess Silky Sugar Blossom  looked at herself, "Uh, Silky? Not to be rude or anything, but I think I've been color swapped!" she chirped, flapping her now blue wings. She giggled, Silky was probably just tired! It's a small mistake!

(OOC: Can I just say that the swapped palette just looks SO much like G1 Wind Whistler and I think it's funny?)  

*points to the candies she was sneaking in the glass container* see what happens when you take one so close in the day of April Fools? 
 

I can definitely swap the colors back *hands you the right candy*

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Princess Silky Sugar ate the candy and changed back to pink with a blue mane, "Yay! Now others won't mistake me for a certain legendary pegasus!" she chirruped 

(OOC: Wind Whistler is that pegasus ) 

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

8 hours ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

"I understand. I'm rarely disrespectful normally, you can ask anypony I know. I won't do it again." Shiny was truly sorry for how she acted toward him, it was very obvious in her eyes. She stretched her hoof even more for him to take it.

“Oh gosh, no worries here! I doubt anyone has ever seen a spectral bunny.” She’d gently nudge @Ghostie boi and then wink at @Shiny Silvermoon”like I’ve said. He’s a sweetie. And Ghostie this is my friend Shiny. She’s a sweetie just like you. And then there’s — DJFKGKFKFKG AHHH @Stellar Cresentmoon!! Why are your colors reversed??” She beckoned the pony over for a remedy 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Princess Silky Sugar Blossom trotted over, and stood beside Silky, waiting for her to find the remedy.

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,895]

6 minutes ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Princess Silky Sugar ate the candy and changed back to pink with a blue mane, "Yay! Now others won't mistake me for a certain legendary pegasus!" she chirruped 

(OOC: Wind Whistler is that pegasus ) 

OOC: Let’s pretend this only the colors more funky. Give me an excuse to see if you’d like to do more or just keep them as two toned. Did you want her eye color to be purple? Feel free to add any more stuff as I work on this later on this evening. I have to run for now <3 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Princess Silky (OOC: Thanks! The purple eyes sound nice! See you later, then!" 

[Silverspark184 1,375]

Silverspark:poke her little nose in kind of curious she passed here but never seen this place "Saphire are you sure we should come here I mean I know you need your scales shining today but do we have to be at a spa we could always go find Fluttershies animal care service "she said 

 

Saphire Crush:a little dragon on Silvepark's head"I am not a pet and besides Spike comes to places like this to sharpen his claws also you could use a mane cut " she said folding her dragon arms 

 

Silverspark:"what is wrong with my mane ?"she asked 

 

Saphire Crush:"well you have grown some since you live with Silky have you noticed your horn grew two inches from before you started "the two stood outside talking quiet enough not to be heard

[Ghostie boi 287]

6 hours ago, Silverspark184 said:

Silverspark:poke her little nose in kind of curious she passed here but never seen this place "Saphire are you sure we should come here I mean I know you need your scales shining today but do we have to be at a spa we could always go find Fluttershies animal care service "she said 

 

Saphire Crush:a little dragon on Silvepark's head"I am not a pet and besides Spike comes to places like this to sharpen his claws also you could use a mane cut " she said folding her dragon arms 

 

Silverspark:"what is wrong with my mane ?"she asked 

 

Saphire Crush:"well you have grown some since you live with Silky have you noticed your horn grew two inches from before you started "the two stood outside talking quiet enough not to be heard

Suddenly this spectral's bunny ears' flicked at the mention of a Certain ponie's name that He knew very much... "Huh, Ok I think you are wrong on that part. Since I- Well ARE dragon's considered pet's ?" He was ask himself now before looking back at Silky "Also my body is still kinda sore so....ow."

[Silverspark184 1,375]

1 hour ago, Ghostie boi said:

Suddenly this spectral's bunny ears' flicked at the mention of a Certain ponie's name that He knew very much... "Huh, Ok I think you are wrong on that part. Since I- Well ARE dragon's considered pet's ?" He was ask himself now before looking back at Silky "Also my body is still kinda sore so....ow."

Silverspark:"well I do feel a little taller and my wings feel different though I would like to have wings preened there are spots I am always and maybe make my mane little shorter "she said "but @Princess Silky is a busy mare maybe we can come back another day "she said just heading out the door but Saphhire grabbed her before saying nope you not going leave "she said pulling her into the door

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

On 2023-04-03 at 12:17 AM, Princess Silky said:

"I feel terribly bad that you you lovelies have to wait." She begins placing face masks and eye cucumbers for those those in the waiting room. "Try not to get into mischief." She looks to Silvermoon, "And don't try to eat the cucumbers." She'd giggle. 
@Ghostie boi @Shiny Silvermoon
 

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"Don't feel bad for me, @Princess Silky! I'm having a great time right now with Ghostie!" The unicorn cheerfully says while Silky places a mask along with cucumbers on her face. Shiny was about to take a bite of cucumber when Silky warned her to not eat the cucumbers on her face. She quickly took a natural position before responding "Pfffff! I don't know a pony stupid enough to do that! Hehe!".

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

On 2023-04-03 at 12:52 AM, Ghostie boi said:

"...Why do ponies but these on their eye's again ?" He'd ask confused but also curious at his own question.

It's obvious, @Ghostie boi! It's because... because... eeh... @Stellar Cresentmoon, can you explain him why we put cucumbers on our faces! I totally know the answer I just want to know if you know! No lying! 

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

On 2023-04-03 at 9:52 AM, Silverspark184 said:

Silverspark:poke her little nose in kind of curious she passed here but never seen this place "Saphire are you sure we should come here I mean I know you need your scales shining today but do we have to be at a spa we could always go find Fluttershies animal care service "she said 

 

Saphire Crush:a little dragon on Silvepark's head"I am not a pet and besides Spike comes to places like this to sharpen his claws also you could use a mane cut " she said folding her dragon arms 

 

Silverspark:"what is wrong with my mane ?"she asked 

 

Saphire Crush:"well you have grown some since you live with Silky have you noticed your horn grew two inches from before you started "the two stood outside talking quiet enough not to be heard

The cucumbers on her eyes suddenly felt on the floor due to the surprise "The horns of unicorns are growing?! I'm learning so much about my own specie from stalking somepony else's conversation with a dragon!"

[ZiggWheelsManning 10,297]

Ziggs acted with kindness by picking up the cucumbers that fell and placed them in a nearby trash can.  

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Shiny Silvermoon Sugar Blossom was unfortunately busy eating cucumbers that were nearby, waiting to be used, "This would make for some nice salad!" she exclaimed, crunching up the cucumbers and chewing for a bit, before swallowing. She flapped her wings a bit, "mmm-mmm! Delicious!" she muttered, satisfied. Then she looked at Shiny, "Ok, that might have been the teeniest bit rude, but they were so good!" she said, then she took a brownie from her pocket and offered it to Shiny, "Would you like some? Ponies say I have the heart of a filly, kind, but strongwilled!" she chuckled. 

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,804]

13 hours ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon Sugar Blossom was unfortunately busy eating cucumbers that were nearby, waiting to be used, "This would make for some nice salad!" she exclaimed, crunching up the cucumbers and chewing for a bit, before swallowing. She flapped her wings a bit, "mmm-mmm! Delicious!" she muttered, satisfied. Then she looked at Shiny, "Ok, that might have been the teeniest bit rude, but they were so good!" she said, then she took a brownie from her pocket and offered it to Shiny, "Would you like some? Ponies say I have the heart of a filly, kind, but strongwilled!" she chuckled. 

@Stellar Cresentmoon "Oh! Thank you, Stellar! I gladly accept your brownie! But I think I'll keep it for later since I don't want crumbs on my facial mask..." 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Shiny Silvermoon "Oh yes! Makes sense!" Sugar Blossom nodded, and sat, suddenly falling asleep. 

(Out of character for a second: I realized I just said that she had the brownie in her "pocket" but she doesn't HAVE pockets! )