offering critique Silky's Beauty Spa (OC creation and re-designing)

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

4 minutes ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon Thanks! *gives a star sticker*

Yay! Something I have no idea what I will do with it! That's what I ever wanted! Thank you! 

[Nightmare Saturn 806]

@Shiny Silvermoon You can stick it on your metaphorical fridge!  

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

2 minutes ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon You can stick it on your metaphorical fridge!  

*Giggles loudly* 

[Nightmare Saturn 806]

@Shiny Silvermoon *Also starts giggling*

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

1 minute ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon *Also starts giggling*

You're so crazy! We could even say that you are "lunatic"! Get it? 

[Nightmare Saturn 806]

@Shiny Silvermoon I love it!!! Coincedentally Luna's one of my favorite princesses!  

[Ice Princess Silky 10,821]

@Shiny Silvermoonmakes a new friend at the spa and accepts the donut from @Stellar Cresentmoonwhile getting booped with stickers.

[Nightmare Saturn 806]

@Princess Silky That's amazing! Can I put that in my about me and credit you? 

[Ice Princess Silky 10,821]

1 minute ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Princess Silky That's amazing! Can I put that in my about me and credit you? 

Absolutely. I love seeing friendships blossom from sharing experiences. I'll be working on the coloring now. If you two find that you like RP, maybe you can consider developing your characters together in the Everfree Roleplay. 

[Nightmare Saturn 806]

@Princess Silky Sure! This is the best time I've had all day, school's stressed me out lately 

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

5 minutes ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon I love it!!! Coincedentally Luna's one of my favorite princesses!  

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

6 minutes ago, Princess Silky said:

@Shiny Silvermoonmakes a new friend at the spa and accepts the donut from @Stellar Cresentmoonwhile getting booped with stickers.

You did this? Wow! You're so fast! You're like rainbow dash but if she was drawing! 

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

8 minutes ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Princess Silky That's amazing! Can I put that in my about me and credit you? 

I didn't even think about it! It's such a wonderful idea! 

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

8 minutes ago, Princess Silky said:

Absolutely. I love seeing friendships blossom from sharing experiences. I'll be working on the coloring now. If you two find that you like RP, maybe you can consider developing your characters together in the Everfree Roleplay. 

Oh? What is that? 

[Nightmare Saturn 806]

@Shiny Silvermoon You can do it too if ya want!  

[Ice Princess Silky 10,821]

@Gaines--- perfect you should be here, I believe I needed to fix the mistake I made on your hair, huh? 

[Nightmare Saturn 806]

1 minute ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

Oh? What is that? 

@Shiny Silvermoon Everfree Forest is a roleplaying section on the forum where you can basically write stories with a friend using OCs!

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

Moments ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon Everfree Forest is a roleplaying section on the forum where you can basically write stories with a friend using OCs!

That seems pretty cool! Maybe I could give it a try! But only if you want to. 

[Nightmare Saturn 806]

@Shiny Silvermoon Of course I would want to! Gives me an excuse to dig out the older characters, I haven't really written anything MLP since my last post in the roleplays, maybe we could a do a one on one RP?

[Shiny Silvermoon 2,992]

1 minute ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon Of course I would want to! Gives me an excuse to dig out the older characters, I haven't really written anything MLP since my last post in the roleplays, maybe we could a do a one on one RP?

Sure! 

[ZiggWheelsManning 7,368]

2 hours ago, Princess Silky said:

@ZiggWheelsManning What do you think? What would you recommend or change? 

The only thing I'm not seeing are the Scootaloo type line drawn designs in his hair. 

Unless there is a technical difficulty, I'm not seeing the 4 vertical strips on his helmet, I'm only seeing 1 or 2 of them.  

[Ice Princess Silky 10,821]

3 minutes ago, ZiggWheelsManning said:

The only thing I'm not seeing are the Scootaloo type line drawn designs in his hair. 

Unless there is a technical difficulty, I'm not seeing the 4 vertical strips on his helmet, I'm only seeing 1 or 2 of them.  

You're right, I'll fix it right up! I've never sketched anything like that before <3 

[ZiggWheelsManning 7,368]

Take as much time as you need to  

[Ice Princess Silky 10,821]

The lovely @GeneralDirectiongetting a re-design on his horn as well as a temporary hair straightening external potion. 

[GeneralDirection 971]

Awwww he's so adorable! ;-; Love the work you're doing with him so far!