Who Am I? [Original Song]

[NyxTheShield 91]

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sx9I_LIxyqw&feature=youtu.be

Inspired by the fic "Believing Stories" by TypewriterError

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30847/Believing-Stories

I hope you like it ^^ Any feedback is appreciated.

[TomokoKuroki 1,707]

I can't offer much criticisim as I am not too good at that for music, but it had a great hook, and I loved how it sounded. It had an errie feel to it which I loved, and the piano added in was awesome. It wasn't a strong song, but it didn't need to be.

 

Do you plan on writing lyrics for it? I feel this song tells quite a story in it'self. Honestly great job, I love it.

[NyxTheShield 91]

I doubt i could write lyrics for it (First because english isnt my main language, and second because i dont have a decent mic xD)

 

Thanks ^^

[Ezynell 2,036]

I was really expecting a pop up scare at the end.

[MincedMassacre 14]

It has the same feeling as the Lanvender Town Theme music in Pokemon, just a bit slower. Here's the theme music:

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MK2iLnTR9V8

 

Anyway, awesome song! Just as a bit of a tip, the end should have been the clicking sounds, but then a louder click to finish it after a moment of silence. Each period equals a second of wait.

 

ex: click . click. click.. click... CLICK.

 

Okay, I have absolutely no idea what I'm saying, but I hope you get my point.

[Magicon 468]

I currently read the story and I must say that your piece definitely matches it. The only thing I can say that is for it to be longer. There is a lot of potential here for a really good piece from a really good story. But, great job anyway.

[Warbalist 133]

I never read the fic, but this is really good.