offering critique Criticizing/Reviewing your Original Characters.

[lite6ite 14]

As I am a big fan of original characters and joined this forum just so see some and give my opinions on some OCs of yours. I'd love to give the OC a rating of 1-5, in 3 categories.

1. Visual design (How good the OC looks when it comes to details and colors)

2. Background and personality (How thought out the OC is)

3. How well it fits into the MLP universe.

Keep in mind, I do have experience with OCs myself, I have experience in making and critiquing art, so I'm not doing this out of personal preference.

I will gladly give out constructive criticism if it is asked of me, otherwise I will just give overall feedback and a rating.

I do want a picture of your OC, basic information, personality and backstory, and a cutie mark description with a story of how the OC got it.

I hope to see at least a few of some of your beautiful creations!

Have a nice day everyone!

[Jonny Music 3,308]

Here ya go. Meet my Ponysona/OC, Silver Whistle. More info in the post below:

Also, a bonus images. My OC doing a cool pose. A profile pic of mine with my OC beside me (then full size), and commissioned fanart:

Edited March 26, 2022 by Jonny Music

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809]

@lite6ite

I altered your title a little bit to make it slightly softer. Finally, I did take out the points system, as it may affect how people feel and bring an unnecessary competition.

I'd be honored if you could review/critique my street racing pegasus named Nitro Spark. Here's a few pics of him:

Original Design (courtesey of The Fabulous Pony Maker)

Sitting on a wall (requested Drawing)

 

And his character bio: https://mlpforums.com/character/30-nitro-spark/

[Will Guide 21,325]

I don't have time to write it all out so I'll just provide you the link to the two main characters that I made up for the world of friendship is Magic. Judge them as you shall

Unicorn Will Guide

https://mlpforums.com/character/10-unicorn-will-guide/

Changeling Will Guide

https://mlpforums.com/character/13-changeling-will-guide/

[Venomous 18,813]

@lite6ite 

This thread has been moved to Original Character Help with the appropriate tag.

[NozomiKaizoku 31]

On 2022-03-26 at 10:38 AM, lite6ite said:

As I am a big fan of original characters and joined this forum just so see some and give my opinions on some OCs of yours. I'd love to give the OC a rating of 1-5, in 3 categories.

1. Visual design (How good the OC looks when it comes to details and colors)

2. Background and personality (How thought out the OC is)

3. How well it fits into the MLP universe.

Keep in mind, I do have experience with OCs myself, I have experience in making and critiquing art, so I'm not doing this out of personal preference.

I will gladly give out constructive criticism if it is asked of me, otherwise I will just give overall feedback and a rating.

I do want a picture of your OC, basic information, personality and backstory, and a cutie mark description with a story of how the OC got it.

I hope to see at least a few of some of your beautiful creations!

Have a nice day everyone!

https://mlpforums.com/character/320-nozomi-kaizoku-strawberry-cloud/

Hi! I saw that you were doing art critiques and wanted to ask if there was anything you wanted to say about my oc Strawberry!

 

Please be a little light about it though, I can be a little sensitive to criticism at times (mainly cause last time i was "criticized" by someone it was just literal bullying sadly, which was unhelpful) /gen

If there's anything I need to do to improve, let me know, thanks!!!