So here's my go at vinyl. Critiques welcome :)

[Tenor Clef 112]

[Tdroid 234]

I like it

[Love4discord18 269]

Hey that's great!! Great job^^

[hᴀrᴍoɴy 107]

I really like the art style.

[FortyShadows 217]

Oh there's a lot of graffiti on the mixing table. Did you get that idea from real life? XD

The drawin looks nice.

Alright, you asked for it:

-Drawing a little big. Either plan out the drawing or just draw it small.

-The mixin table would look better in 1-point perspective. I'll leave you to Google for that.

-Body a little large

-Tail seems to make a sharp turn at the beginning. It should be more rounded

-Mane and tail could be outlined in a shade of blue a little darker than the darker blue on her mane =P

-Glasses could use more even ovals (make sure sizes are equal)

[Tenor Clef 112]

Thanks guys I feel like there's something wrong with the speaker but I can't put my finger on it.

 

Oh there's a lot of graffiti on the mixing table. Did you get that idea from real life? XD

The drawin looks nice.

Alright, you asked for it:

-Drawing a little big. Either plan out the drawing or just draw it small.

-The mixin table would look better in 1-point perspective. I'll leave you to Google for that.

-Body a little large

-Tail seems to make a sharp turn at the beginning. It should be more rounded

-Mane and tail could be outlined in a shade of blue a little darker than the darker blue on her mane =P

-Glasses could use more even ovals (make sure sizes are equal)

 

I did get the idea from real life actually. My buddy's mixing table is like that with stickers and such. I'll check out one point though. Thanks

[My little pwny 1,392]

I like it. The mane is pretty accurate IMO, and it captures Vinyl's personality well. The only problem I have with it is the body is too long. It's still a good drawing though.

[Ezynell 2,037]

The only thing anatomically wrong here is the back leg should overlap the stomach

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

That is really great, and that dj table has a lot of detail! nice work

[Hazardus_Havard. 479]

Constructive Criticism -

 

The biggest problem would be either the head is too small or the body is too large. Using the scratch table as an origin point on size, it appears to be the body, so that needs to be shrunk.

 

That really is the biggest problem here. Everything else can be cleaned up in the image if you decide to scan it and digitally ink it up. If I were you, I would go collect some reference images on speakers and scratch tables so for pictures drawn later you can have a remembrance of the referenced images from before.

[Strawberry Tart 161]

Constructive Criticism:

 

Okay, I really like it. But the head seems a bit small. In addition, the head is also a bit too wide versus long. Pony heads are almost perfect ovals. It seems that the body is a bit too large, too. It's very long and a pony's body is supposed to be a bit shorter than that. I would also like to point out how you made the table; it's not a cube, but more like a trapezoid. You should look at some pictures of the MLP, so that your next drawings are more to scale with the ponies from the show.

 

Except for that, there is nothing wrong with it. I like the mane and sunglasses very much! It looks really cool. I also like how you dres stuff on the DJ table to make it look more interesting

[NavelColt 22,881]

I think Vinyl herself is pretty decent. I like the hair, that looks nice, and though body proportions could use a slight bit of work in places, they don't stand out so much that they distract me from the piece as a whole. If anything at all I'd say the table is really, really short, and that it could be made a bit higher. It doesn't look realistic being that small, to me. Other than that, I like it, I think it's a nice go at Vinyl

Edited July 8, 2012 by ~Chaotic Discord~

[Nightfall 3,950]

I like it, dubstep dishwasher and all!

 

However, maybe if she had banging headphones on and was holding them on with her left hoof, it might look a bit better. Her right hoof could stay on the table... We've seen ponies stand on their hind legs for a good time before in the show.