writing Treatment of the Heart (poetry)

[Inkfeather 597]

Treatment of the Heart

A friend, a good friend of mine, once told me that true love works like medicine, it cures everything that is bad, gives you euphoric experiences and surpress the endless torment of this world.

Poetry, about that. Enjoy.

[TheBronyHeart 2,640]

I very much like this poem, the emotion was present and easily transferred and it flowed nicely. However, I cant describe it, but something felt off about it... maybe thats just me. It was a well written poem.