writing Go and see

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Oh to the precarious dweller you are, do you not see?

For all in which beauty defines is absent in itself.

Best not to dwell on such things, and so I urge you.

Seek out anew and seek unrelenting.

Can you not yet see it?

Far beyond sight is a place of true beauty and wonder.

Where beauty is not as defined by itself.

Where all are together as one.

Where one never forgets to remember the next day.

Edited September 20, 2012 by TheBronyHeart

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

Yet again, I'm impressed. It flows really well, and I love the meaning. Yeah, it's pretty darn amazing, so you did a really great job on it.

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Yet again, I'm impressed. It flows really well, and I love the meaning. Yeah, it's pretty darn amazing, so you did a really great job on it.

 

Why thank you, I do try. Also, I will be compiling a list of every poem I have done and put on the forums if you are interested.

 

and for some reason it didnt post the last line of the poem, but I fixed it.