visual art a new drawing

[Onix-warmachine-brony 38]

i'm trying out this new drawing-style not sure if all of you know what i am talking about well what i mean is that the lines are somewhat exaggerated making everything look nightmare-like

(keep in mind that this picture was taken with the web cam on my laptop)

Edited October 1, 2012 by Onix-warmachine-brony

[morethanicecream 116]

the drawing needs some improvement. the drawing needs shading along wit some more lines. The lines are the biggest issue, neverless, it is a good drawing

[One 498]

I like it, it's pretty cool. Maybe add some more color to it, and detail if you can. And to add a little more maybe make a background, it will also show its domain.