Viscra Maelstrom - Forlorn Journey

[Viscra Maelstrom 3,718]

hello everyone. i'm back with another song here, this time an original one, and the first full song i've ever produced in FL Studio. copy-pasta from SoundCloud:

 

"This is as far as I can come with this song. mostly finished, perhaps repetitive melody, but I don't know how to improve it anymore than it is now.

 

It's some standard electronic music with a bit more organic sound to it (some acoustic drum samples, melodies that aren't strictly synth sounds...), i like how it turned out in the end, and I wanted to do more with it, but this is as far as my abilities go that I can do with it.

 

Enjoy."

 

here's the song:

 

http://soundcloud.com/viscramaelstrom/forlorn-journey

 

enjoy. :3