writing My Writings!

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

Writing number 1:

 

It was a cold and grey day,

When I realised I was all alone.

I realised that I had no-one around me,

No-one who cared for me,

No-one who would be there for me

I looked all around,

And could not find a single soul

There was nothing I could find,

Nothing could ever make me feel whole,

Again

 

I’m a stranger in a strange land

Like an outsider looking in from the outside in

I wonder where I belong in this strange world

I wonder why I can’t seem to fit in

And try as hard as I can,

This game of life that I play

I will never win.

I will never win.

 

Looking at life through rose tinted glasses,

All I see is red,

There are some days,

Some days I just don’t want to get out of bed.

And I wish,

I wish I would just wake up dead.

They sky was once a clear blue,

But now it is covered with shades of black and grey

And I don’t know what to do.

I don’t want to live on anymore.

So can you just open up the door,

Open the door, to the rest of my life.

 

I’m a stranger in a strange land

Like an outsider looking in from the outside in

I wonder where I belong in this strange world

I wonder why I can’t seem to fit in

And try as hard as I can,

This game of life that I play

I will never win.

I will never win.

 

These tears, they roll down my cheek,

And I fear the pain, I fear the rain,

You heard me call myself weak,

And you saw me put myself down,

So how could you just stand there?

How could you just stare?

Why didn’t you,

Why didn’t you step in?

Why didn’t you put a stop to all of my pain?

To all of my pain.

 

I’m a stranger in a strange land

Like an outsider looking in from the outside in

I wonder where I belong in this strange world

I wonder why I can’t seem to fit in

And try as hard as I can,

This game of life that I play

I will never win.

I will never win.

 

I will never win, this game of life I am in. (x2)

 

Writing number 2:

 

I’ve been searching for a reason,

My whole entire life,

But now that I have found it,

Is it worth the price?

I’ve finally found a place of my own,

But now that I’ve found it,

I find that all my faith has died

And all of my friends have lied.

 

I’m a stranger in strange land,

You were there, holding my hand,

But when I asked you to forever stay,

You shot me down and walked away.

I gave you my heart,

You gave me nothing but grief,

But now that you’re gone,

I feel nothing but relief!

 

To say that I never loved you would be a lie,

But when all is said and done,

I would be more than happy to see you die!

You lied to, abused and used me,

But now that you are gone,

I can finally be set free.

The pain that you put me through,

Was more than I could bear

When I was with you,

I felt like for me,

You just never could care

 

Now my feelings are dead,

There are no more thoughts in my head,

And I want to forget,

Forget that you ever existed,

And your deadly charms I had resisted,

There is no more left in my life

I just want to die and be forgotten,

In the ground I will lay, forever rotting

 

This is the story of my life!

 

(I would appreciate your thoughts on these and more when they come)

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

(grin and takes out guitar)

 

Ah, yes. This will be... perfect material for me to use... hehehe...

 

Expect this to become viral on the internet within about a week.

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

I was hoping someone would put the words to music though I'd like to receive credit when it is due for writing the words etc... u know

[I am TheBronyHeart 7]

Like an outsider looking in from the outside in

It was all very good.. except this line.

 

Like an outsider looking in from the outside in

 

The first "in" should dissapear

 

Like an outsider looking from the outside in

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

It was all very good.. except this line.

 

Like an outsider looking in from the outside in

 

The first "in" should dissapear

 

Like an outsider looking from the outside in

 

I know, I was really depressed when I wrote those lyrics... but yeah, I look at it and think... that first In is rather redundant isn't it?