writing Winter

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Of winters age, and star lit nights.

From heart’s warmth and snow’s sweet cold.

Interpretation of beauty.

Seeing sights of marvelous nature.

Sounds that pierce the silent air.

Of winter’s age, and star lit nights.

Lost among this glorified snow.

By means of better sensation, I surrender.

-David Favret

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

Lovely, as always. It really captures the essence of the season in a very powerful, emotional way. I feel cold just reading it!

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Lovely, as always. It really captures the essence of the season in a very powerful, emotional way. I feel cold just reading it!

 

Thank you

 

I was trying to take a break from long story like poems and instead trying to write smaller, maore concentrated verses, I am glasd you liked it.

[khaine21x3 789]

I like poems with simpler topics and it's nice to see you move on from hearthbreak poems.Is it just a coincidence or do you post poems at the same time every single day?

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Is it just a coincidence or do you post poems at the same time every single day?

Its not a coincidence.

Every weekday i go to school, and during my time off or breaks, I go down to the library to check the forums and maybe type up a poem.

 

I like poems with simpler topics and it's nice to see you move on from hearthbreak poems.

=/

 

I am usually not good at writing simple stuff. My mind is FILLED with too many complexities.

As for the... umm... heartbreak ... I am pretty sure that is over and done with now, but, in all honesty, I dont think it was heartbreak.

Just emotional release.