Rainbow Factory Part 2 (read description)

[Bladewing 17]

Now I know what you're thinking. "Really? An unofficial response to some random grimdark fanfic written by an AMATEUR WRITER at that? Sounds pretty lame :|"
 
It started as just a backstory for my OC, but as I got more and more into it, developed an in-depth plot, and started to receive positive reviews, I just couldn't stop myself. Note that I'm not aiming for a completely grimdark tone, though it can get pretty graphic at times. It's more dramatic than anything. I'm also still in the writing stage, and admittedly, don't work on it very often (Maybe like... one day a month :X), but I'm not gonna give up on it, so if it does happen to interest you, know that the next part WILL inevitably be released.
 
But basically, the story is about a young, teenaged pegasus named Bladewing who had finally reached his final exams in Advanced Flight School. As events unfold, he begins to question the legitimacy of failed ponies' alleged "banishment" from Cloudsdale...

Prologue: http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/101/d/9/rainbow_factory_part_2_by_darkd3s7r0y3r-d4vqasv.html

 

Chapters 1 and 2: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/164/3/a/rainbow_factory_part_2__chapters_1_and_2_by_darkd3s7r0y3r-d52g8zw.html

 

Chapter 3: http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/232/f/e/rainbow_factory_part_2__chapter_3_by_darkd3s7r0y3r-d540n65.html

 

Chapter 4: http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/352/7/0/rainbow_factory_part_2__chapter_4_by_darkd3s7r0y3r-d5o5kz0.html

 

Chapter 5: To Be Released