writing Fear (poem)

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

This is a poem I wrote for a free- write in my high school creative writing class. I really like how it turned out.  It was featured in a local poetry event.  Any comments are appreciated.

 

"Fear"

I am not afraid to die,
For it is inevitable, I cannot deny.
I am not afraid to live.
I will face any challenge it may give.
I don't fear monsters, spirits, or ghosts.
I don't fear beasts from distant coasts.
I don't fear men or their creations.
I don't fear wars with distant nations.
I fear not horrors written in pages
Or those on screens or performed on stages.
I don't fear anger from above.
I fear the loss of those I love.

 

What do you think?

Edited February 7, 2013 by MelancholicMemory

[ApexHunter 166]

I fear not enough ponies will see this...and I know I keep repeating myself but I really must say that your work is amazing And I also hope others will see your work It's just sad that such nice poetry wouldn't be noticed

[V1RUS_ 85]

Yes!! I like this a lot!

So much that I was wondering if I could use a ponyfied vernon of it in my fan fiction. You would be credited of course.

A like to my fic is here:  http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9434/The-Newcomer

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

Yes!! I like this a lot!

So much that I was wondering if I could use a ponyfied vernon of it in my fan fiction. You would be credited of course.

A like to my fic is here:  http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9434/The-Newcomer

Wow, cool! I' m glad you like it, and I would be honored to have a version of my poem in your fic if I am credited. Could you please send me a link to the chapter where you use it when it is done? 

 

 

I fear not enough ponies will see this...and I know I keep repeating myself but I really must say that your work is amazing And I also hope others will see your work It's just sad that such nice poetry wouldn't be noticed

Thank you again for such kind words. It really means a lot to me.

[V1RUS_ 85]

Wow, cool! I' m glad you like it, and I would be honored to have a version of my poem in your fic if I am credited. Could you please send me a link to the chapter where you use it when it is done? 

 

 

Thank you again for such kind words. It really means a lot to me.

 

Happily! I fear (bad joke.) it won't be used until one of the later chapters. (I think Pringles Celerstia will tell herself this or utter it or whatever when my OC villain is beating the shit out of her.) When I credit you though, I can give links to you on any other websites you are on. Or just this forum if that's what you want.

 

EDIT: Quoting never seems to work for me. *Facehoof*

Edited December 29, 2012 by Scourge012

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

Happily! I fear (bad joke.) it won't be used until one of the later chapters. (I think Pringles Celerstia will tell herself this or utter it or whatever when my OC villain is beating the shit out of her.) When I credit you though, I can give links to you on any other websites you are on. Or just this forum if that's what you want.

 

EDIT: Quoting never seems to work for me. *Facehoof*

Okay, I can wait. I' m sure it will be awesome. Could you please link my profile here and my deviantART (in my signature)? Thank you!

[V1RUS_ 85]

Okay, I can wait. I' m sure it will be awesome. Could you please link my profile here and my deviantART (in my signature)? Thank you!

Okay friend! I really can't thank you enough This is going to really help me and my Editor, FirebirdBtops make the story more dramatic. Nothing like a good piece of poetry!