music What am I? (Now Remastered!)

[Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,632]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fp5gKxAupNc&feature=youtu.be

 

This one happened sooner than I expected. I was a bit more experimental with this one, despite it's simplicity. This particular song signifies Kyoshi's internal struggle after his transformation. What was his purpose? Is it this? Can he control what he has been granted? Please like, comment, and subscribe for more!

 

EDIT: Updated topic with remastered version.

Edited January 21, 2013 by Kyoshi

[Sarajevo 124]

Sounds dark, and ominous.. and the percussion just adds on more to that, it's really nice and fits well with the transformation... gives me the feeling that a storm is coming

[Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,632]

Sounds dark, and ominous.. and the percussion just adds on more to that, it's really nice and fits well with the transformation... gives me the feeling that a storm is coming

You described my intentions perfectly. That is the atmosphere that I was aiming for. Now I am in a good mood.   I love atmospheric songs and a percussion of a more tribal nature. 

[Yuna Crescent 142]

that song was AMAZING!!! i could just feel the intense struggle for control, and if i may ask, is this from a fanfiction story or something? because if so i think i might like to read this. o.o

[pegasister101 39]

Oh my Celestia I LOVE IT!!! Tis such a great song and it is really very well done. And as mentioned earlier, it does kinda set in that ominous feeling almost like a storm is on its way. I really like the effect the percussion puts into it when it starts up. This a great song and i would actually like to hear more from you! Thanks!

[CloudFyre 848]

Not bad! There's some good ambiance in it - and the dark atmosphere fits the context.


This was written in FL Studio, wasn't it?

If I could add a suggestion: it sounds a tiny bit "muddy" at certain points - if you drop an equalizer onto your bass and cut out the super low frequencies, and super high frequencies, it might sound a tiny bit cleaner.

Other than that, it sounds pretty good!

[Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,632]

Not bad! There's some good ambiance in it - and the dark atmosphere fits the context.

 

 

This was written in FL Studio, wasn't it?

 

If I could add a suggestion: it sounds a tiny bit "muddy" at certain points - if you drop an equalizer onto your bass and cut out the super low frequencies, and super high frequencies, it might sound a tiny bit cleaner.

 

Other than that, it sounds pretty good!

 

Phew. Went a bit over my head there, I am still learning the advanced ropes.   Also, YOU KNEW! Methinks you use the program as well. I will be using your advise. When I improve more,I will probably revise this one. Thanks for more kind words! I truly appreciate them. 

[CloudFyre 848]

Phew. Went a bit over my head there, I am still learning the advanced ropes.   Also, YOU KNEW! Methinks you use the program as well. I will be using your advise. When I improve more,I will probably revise this one. Thanks for more kind words! I truly appreciate them. 

Hahaha, don't worry about it.

 

And yes, I may have used the program once or twice...   I've been working with the program for over half a year, and I'm still learning a ton of new stuff.

 

Edited August 26, 2016 by CloudFyre

[The Leafeon Pinkeh 3,603]

I love the beat to the song and it completely fits in with the scenario you've given! I would love to watch or read this story!! I loved 2:51 to the end! 

[Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,632]

that song was AMAZING!!! i could just feel the intense struggle for control, and if i may ask, is this from a fanfiction story or something? because if so i think i might like to read this. o.o

Late reply. This is actually based off of a story that I am trying to write, keyword being trying. I can come up with so many great ideas in my mind but then I am terrible at actually writing it down. I have some great concepts for my OC, that being Kyoshi.

 

I have uploaded the remastered version of the song and have updated the topic accordingly. Check it out! It now sounds a bit smoother.