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I'm writing a MLP parody of Complicated by Avril Lavigne, but I can't decide what to make it about.

 

Twilight Sparkle singing about Shining Armour and Candance's marriage, and its aftermath? Feeling like a third wheel, her brother spending more time with his wife than with her, that sort of thing?

 

Rainbow Dash singing about her unrequited love for Applejack, or vice versa? If the whole song focuses on this, then what if I had each verse sung by one of the two ponies, and how they think the other one only likes them as a friend, and they don't want to admit their love and risk scaring her off? And should they get together at the end or not?

 

Rainbow Dash singing about the events of Cupcakes? (A seriously messed-up Pinkie-kills-Rainbow fanfic that is far beyond the term Grimdark.) "Why'd I have to go and get myself so mutilated?" Something like that. Not sure whether to make this a comedy or a sad song. Maybe a bit of both.

 

Or, should I make the song about all three of these, with one verse each? Any thoughts/suggestions?

 

Bump.

 

By the way, because of the forum character limit, I must now talk, and talk, and talk, until I have taken up 100 characters. Almost there... Perfect! Okay, here we go! Bump!

 

Imagine Rainbow Dash singing this part:

"Tell me!

Why'd I have to go and get myself all mutilated?

It really hurts, and,

I'd do anything to get my wings and I re-aquainted!

What can I do?

Can't fly, I can't moult, or race, or get Colts or cheer for the Wonderbolts!

Oh, I haven't been the same, since my wings and I were seperated!

No, no, noooo..."

 

So, what do you think? How is it? It's the Rainbow Dash Cupcakes sad-singing part. It'll also have a verse, as well as a chorus. Maybe even the whole song could end up like this! Would that be fun? /)^3^(\

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Well, considering the songs name is "complicated", maybe it could be about explaining your bonydom to someone else.

 

Tell me,

Why'd you have to go ahead and just say that you hate it,

I see the way you're

Judging me like everyone else so you can fit in

The truth is this so, you see some, thing you like, so you try, to just fight, your desire, to indulge, so nobody judges,

I know it was made for little girls but no need to hate it, oh hay no.


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NO. There are enough songs about the fandom.I guess that'd work. I guess I'll just focus on one, then. Maybe I'll make all three someday?Also, why has nopony said anything about ApplejackxRainbow Dash yet? Doesn't anypony like that pairing?

 

Seriously? Nopony? Nopony at all? What, the fastest flyer in all of Equestria and the possible heir to the Apple Family farm and Sweet Apple Acres can't get together?

 

And really, nopony wants to hear Rainbow Dash singing her heart out, after getting it ripped out? Possibly literally, depending on the song?

 

And really, nopony wants to hear Rainbow Dash singing her heart out, after getting it ripped out? Possibly literally, depending on the song?

 

And really, nopony wants to hear Rainbow Dash singing her heart out, after getting it ripped out? Possibly literally, depending on the song?

 

I can honestly say that as the element of -LOYALTY-, I find this initial response rather disheartening. But I will not give up! I'm sure that you'll love the finished song a lot more, and more importantly, you'll buy the finished song, right? It's gonna be SO AWESOME!

 

/)^3^(\

 

> inb4 "What are you, the Element of Greed?!"


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Fine, I'll make a Shining Armour and Cadence one. But I'm still going to make a Cupcakes one! How can you say no to a song about literally getting your heart ripped out? there aren't enough songs like that these days, you know!


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My fanfic, starring Silver Star Apple: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/224996/the-shining-silver-star-of-the-apple-family

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How can you say no to a song about literally getting your heart ripped out? there aren't enough songs like that these days, you know!
You obviously have never seen the music High Schoolers are listening to nowadays. Hell, even little kids are listening to metal on their Ipods.

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Seriously? Where? Now THAT sounds better than some of the modern crrap that keeps going on the radio these days. I hate what happened to mainstream pop/rap music. Why can't they have some decent rock, metal, dubstep- ANYTHING GOOD?!?! Instead of the same sex-related "songs" from the same slutty autotuned diva attention-horse.

 

Oh, listen to me, I sound like an old man! I'm only in my teens, and I already hate modern mainstream "music"!

 

You a Stupid Hoe - Micki Minaj

 

Run the world(Girls)

 

Go ahead, look up those "Songs". Then search for a good song from the eighties or ninties, preferably one without any of that 'Shoo-wop-boo-wop' nonsense.

 

And try to say to me with a straight face that these 'modern' 'popular' songs are anywhere near as good as those old songs.

 

Bump of infinite justice and judgement!!!

Edited by Asquerade

I was dead until the moment I met you. I was a powerless corpse pretending to be alive. Living without power, without the ability to change my course, was akin to a slow death. If I must live as I did before then... -Lelouch, Code Geass - My NEW DeviantART: http://SilverStarApple.deviantart.com/Want to make money for being an AWESOME PONY? https://www.tsu.co/Epsilon725

My fanfic, starring Silver Star Apple: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/224996/the-shining-silver-star-of-the-apple-family

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