music New song I wrote

[Grimm Darkness 7]

Hey everypony, I've been writing songs like this for a year or 2 but never told anyone cause its kinda my place to just poor everything out into words, would love feedback on it, I know its not the greatest but its just a little something i have been going through recently, for anyone else that has similar issues, i hope you enjoy this and it inspires you as it was what I got through on, Thanks!

 

 "your still you"

(chorus) 

you can change the way you look,

You can change the things you do,

But when you look in the mirror,

Your still you

 

Verse 1

You can live your life lonely and scared,

Or you can wake up to the sweeter air,

and you may find that being yourself,

Is the only thing you gotta be

 

You can live your life with a broken heart,

and feel that life has fallen apart,

Its your choice

 

whether you want to stay broken,

Or just watch as it turns to scars

 

(chorus)

 

Verse 2

Live your life trying to change what's been done,

Or you can learn from it to just move on,

It's called the past cause its all been and gone

 

If you feel like all that is meant for you is heart-ache,

You aren't being yourself, your asking for heart break,

Stop trying so hard for the wrong people,

they will disappear so that right one will be yours forever

 

(chorus)

Being yourself is the best thing you can be,

Just try it for once and you will surely see

(chorus)

[Budding Night 1,043]

That's actually pretty awesome bro! Also, That's deep man, That deep -salute-

 

~Crystal

P.S: Will you release an audio? I'm just wondering what it would sound like.. Hmm..

[Doctor-Whooves 288]

I look at these lyrics and know it's an excellent tune, but I don't know what. I toss and turn many a night wondering what the mystery melody is. I don't know, and it is slowly driving me mad.

[Grimm Darkness 7]

I'm thinking more and more of uploading an audio... its definitely something I'm considering, maybe in a day or two... have to figure out a guitar or drum tune to go with it