Adash 193 April 7, 2015 Share April 7, 2015 Personally, I like Rainbow Factory is better than Cupcakes. Of course, none were really scary or disgusting. I laughed during both of them. Sig made by Aeron Quillson. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omar 692 April 8, 2015 Share April 8, 2015 I didn't like either of them. But if I had to choose, I would choose rainbow factory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeric 46,866 April 9, 2015 Share April 9, 2015 Just popping in here to remind old timers any inform any new users about some things. While we allow a discussion of Cupcakes and RF, but in order to not break the NSFW rules on gorefics you will need to refrain from posting any descriptions of the elements of the story that would exceed a PG13 audience. In other words, no details please. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adorkable 2,737 April 9, 2015 Share April 9, 2015 They're both pretty bad, lol. I'm not big into fan fics but I did read these two, both leaving me with a sick feeling in my stomach. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KatonRyu 1,033 April 9, 2015 Share April 9, 2015 I prefer Rainbow Factory because I can see at least the song existing in-universe as a scary story or urban legend. The lyrics of the song are chilling and ominous, whereas Cupcakes was just a lot of gore. Even comparing only the fics Rainbow Factory wins because it was written better and seemed more thought out. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wicked Funky 2,955 April 9, 2015 Share April 9, 2015 (edited) I found niether disturbing or anything like that, Its hard to make colourfull ponies living in a magical land disturbing... Then theres "Sweet apple massacre" Its only that fanfic and the last episode of "Salladfingers" that has actually disturbed me. Seriusly people, Never EVER read "sweet apple massacre".... Scarred for life and beyond. Edited April 9, 2015 by PonyShiro Just your avrage scrub Irelia, Poppy and Shen main. Signature banner by ~ Akatsuki ~. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,112 April 9, 2015 Share April 9, 2015 (edited) Rainbow factory is better than cupcakes, due to having a plot beyond "one pony tortures another pony to death" but Pegasus Device is better than RF because it has much more detail, is better written and clears up all the contradictions and unexplained events from it. The final chapter was a bit rushed and pointless though - the story is better if it ends at the endpoint of the previous chapter. If you want an MLP gore fanfic with a good story read Rainbow Factory and Pegasus Device (Pegasus Device is the better fic, but reading Rainbow Factory helps you understand it better), and if you want one with horrific and graphic torture that outdoes pretty much anything else read Cheerilee's Garden (It's more extreme, much better written, and a lot longer than cupcakes - I felt sick reading it, and I'm having a hard time finishing the first chapter). ...And if you want one with clop read "after that fateful night" by peppy greyskull. It's not particularly clop heavy, and it's very well written. The pain and fear aren't always as extreme as in Rainbow Factory or Cupcakes, but the story makes up for it and there's still enough blood and death to keep gore enthusiasts entertained. It's very long (longer than order of the phoenix), but you don't actually need to read all of it to get to the good bits - the chapters are generally divided by subject (gore, story and world building, romance, clop) and these come in different combinations in different chapters so it's not hard to avoid the ones of those that you're not interested in if you just check over the chapter to see what its subject is. Cheerilee's Garden killed my love for her, i'll never be able to look at her the same way again. I found niether disturbing or anything like that, Its hard to make colourfull ponies living in a magical land disturbing... Then theres "Sweet apple massacre" Its only that fanfic and the last episode of "Salladfingers" that has actually disturbed me. Seriusly people, Never EVER read "sweet apple massacre".... Scarred for life and beyond. Heard the grammar was worse. Edited April 9, 2015 by Candy Star //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wicked Funky 2,955 April 9, 2015 Share April 9, 2015 @Candy star The one i read was really well written ;____; Just your avrage scrub Irelia, Poppy and Shen main. Signature banner by ~ Akatsuki ~. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Celli 4,339 April 13, 2015 Share April 13, 2015 Honestly, both are not very good, and just kind of edgy. in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LanternLight 67 April 13, 2015 Share April 13, 2015 So I saw the post about Cheerilee's Garden, and I decided to read it. I think that was the worst decision I have made in my life so far. 1 "De gustibus non est disputandum" "In matters of taste, there can be no disputes." My Info Page! : https://mlpforums.com/page/eqw-characters/_/approved/lantern-light-r297 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,112 April 13, 2015 Share April 13, 2015 So I saw the post about Cheerilee's Garden, and I decided to read it. I think that was the worst decision I have made in my life so far. That was a cringe worthy piece, i only made through 5 mins. before i stopped. @Candy star The one i read was really well written ;____; And which was that? You weren't telling me which one. 1 //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LanternLight 67 April 13, 2015 Share April 13, 2015 (edited) That was a cringe worthy piece, i only made through 5 mins. before i stopped. I decided to finish it. Even worse decision.... my mind shall be fractured for days to come. Edited April 13, 2015 by LanternLight 1 "De gustibus non est disputandum" "In matters of taste, there can be no disputes." My Info Page! : https://mlpforums.com/page/eqw-characters/_/approved/lantern-light-r297 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,112 April 13, 2015 Share April 13, 2015 (edited) I decided to finish it. Even worse decision.... my mind shall be fractured for days to come. Feel sorry for you, Just when i think there couldn't be one scary enough, boom! straight to the bathroom. I also have another one, Silent Ponyville. Now those were enjoyable imo. Mostly because of Pinkamena( i know she didn't have a good character and people complained about it), but hey; we all have our likes and dislikes, right? Edited April 13, 2015 by Candy Star //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonasDarkmane 19,789 April 13, 2015 Share April 13, 2015 I prefer neither. However, I managed to watch Rainbow Factory, but when I got to Cup Cakes, I immediately stopped watching after the... bad part... started.... yeah.... 1 Signature by @Kyoshi Ask Me Matsunaga Hisahide's death https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKT5Khp3-0U Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LanternLight 67 April 13, 2015 Share April 13, 2015 I prefer neither. However, I managed to watch Rainbow Factory, but when I got to Cup Cakes, I immediately stopped watching after the... bad part... started.... yeah.... Well...don't read Cheerilee's Garden then. "De gustibus non est disputandum" "In matters of taste, there can be no disputes." My Info Page! : https://mlpforums.com/page/eqw-characters/_/approved/lantern-light-r297 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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