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(First thing: IM SO SO SO SORRY... It took.. a little too long.. I'm sorry... I wasn't in mood to write.. and I'm not strong enough to force myself...

Second thing: Have more of Syd Barrett..)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1TCL2PXEMIE

 

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Both of you know that you are not all alone right now. But... what now? That's the question flowing through your mind.

Suddenly, both of you feel a pain in your hooves, like if you stood on something..

Looking down, you realise that there are keys growing from the ground like flowers, all over the ground.

 

 

You know what? Fine. I'm done here. I don't know what this box wants me to do, and it's not doing a very good job of telling me. Maybe it's all just a dream. Maybe this is my personal hell. Who cares? "Okay, you schtupid ponies. Do your vorst." Red waded into the fray, snapping bones and ducking attackers, trying to figure out what was supposed to happen

 

A bright, strong light suddenly makes you blind.

"Only the strongest will survive..." you hear the whispering.

Your eyes regain their ability to see.

The field is empty. You are the only one in here. Well.. not exactly.

There's a familiar door in front of you.

 

(Congratulations. You finished your first song.)

 

 

 

 

 

@@Nightfall, @

(Nightfall: Keep in mind that you are old now.)

Suddenly, a cabinet in the bathroom opened and a pile of flasks appeared in the bathroom. The well-known flasks that are also all over the sink near the mirror.

You can see a poster inside of the cabinet. It says:

RULES OF USAGE:

1. DON'T OPEN

2. DON'T DRINK

3. DON'T LEAVE

 

(OCC: I love that song :3 )

Autumn looked at the door.

Great! not you again! Autumn thought, letting out a deep sigh.

she walked up to the door and rested her head against the door.

well.. here goes nothing... she thought, reaching towards the door knob, hoping that it might lead home.

 

All you could see was just another darkness. It didn't lead.. nowhere. But before you could turn around, the door disappeared, leaving you in the darkness once again.

There was just a black hall. But then..

You heard a tune. A different, unknown one. But you felt like it was a part of you. You decided to follow the tune and found out that there were some other doors. Or.. more like an arc, not doors.

Running through them, you found yourself in an usual room with a set of chess on the bedside table and a pony in the bed.

 

(You can now interact with Star Song)

 

Star was about to complain for the hundredth time...until...she was laying in bed (?)

"What the bu-" She stopped...she could see a light...no...she was only imagining it...but, what...what was it. She tried to move her foreleg...but it felt stiff. "What is...that light ?" She asked herself.

 

The light in your head started to form. It looked like a small dot in a darkness at first... a moving dot. Moving to you.

As the dot was getting closer, you started to realise that it was a pony. A silhouette of a pony.

You open your eyes. And... there's someone in your room.

 

(You can now interact with Autumn Dream)

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(OOC: I am assuming she can move.)

 

 

Star noticed the pony and squeaked, then backed against the edge of the bed...she didn't expect the dizzy spell that came on just a few moments later. She put her hoof to her head and slipped of the bed onto the floor with a loud *Thump*

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@@Nightfall, @

(Nightfall: Keep in mind that you are old now.)

Suddenly, a cabinet in the bathroom opened and a pile of flasks appeared in the bathroom. The well-known flasks that are also all over the sink near the mirror.

You can see a poster inside of the cabinet. It says:

RULES OF USAGE:

1. DON'T OPEN

2. DON'T DRINK

3. DON'T LEAVE

 

"God, yes. I want to get out. I was minding my own business, setting up my shop, when I found a box. I opened it, and now I'm here. And I'm old for, like, no reason at all. If you have any idea of what to do, please, help. There's this TV in the other room, and I need help knowing what it means."

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Autumn rushed to the new pony and quickly dove down to make sure she was okay.

Autumn sat next to the strange pony and sighed.

 

"the first pony I've seen in a while... and she is knocked out cold... its just my luck in this situation..." she muttered to herself, double checking to see if the pony was okay.


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Autumn rushed to the new pony and quickly dove down to make sure she was okay.

Autumn sat next to the strange pony and sighed.

 

"the first pony I've seen in a while... and she is knocked out cold... its just my luck in this situation..." she muttered to herself, double checking to see if the pony was okay.

 

Star slowly sat up. "I...I'm ok." She said, blinking a couple times then looking up at Autumn. "Lemme guess...you're gonna start talking nonsense and you're gonna ask me to play checkers or something...right ?" She asked, pushing herself to her hooves, a little confused as to why she felt so tired.

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Star slowly sat up. "I...I'm ok." She said, blinking a couple times then looking up at Autumn. "Lemme guess...you're gonna start talking nonsense and you're gonna ask me to play checkers or something...right ?" She asked, pushing herself to her hooves, a little confused as to why she felt so tired.

"uh... no... I suck at chess... but if its the only thing we have here to do... maybe its not that bad of an idea..." Autumn said, pondering what she just said.

What the hay Autumn?! why would you even suggest something as crazy as playing a game that you completely fail at?! Autumn thought.


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"uh... no... I suck at chess... but if its the only thing we have here to do... maybe its not that bad of an idea..." Autumn said, pondering what she just said.

What the hay Autumn?! why would you even suggest something as crazy as playing a game that you completely fail at?! Autumn thought.

"I said checkers...not chess. There was this pony who somehow got tied to a chair...he wanted me to play chess but he only put one of the funny small pieces in the corner of the board...and even I know that's not how you play chess. Where are we ? And who are you ?" She asked.


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"I said checkers...not chess. There was this pony who somehow got tied to a chair...he wanted me to play chess but he only put one of the funny small pieces in the corner of the board...and even I know that's not how you play chess. Where are we ? And who are you ?" She asked.

"I really have no idea where we are, or why we're here... but I do know my name... I'm Autumn Dream, most ponies call me Autumn." she said, flicking her tail back and forth.

"and what might your name be?" Autumn asked, wanting to know the answers to the questions Star had just asked her.

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"I really have no idea where we are, or why we're here... but I do know my name... I'm Autumn Dream, most ponies call me Autumn." she said, flicking her tail back and forth.

"and what might your name be?" Autumn asked, wanting to know the answers to the questions Star had just asked her.

"M-My name is S-star." She said, quietly. Whenever it came to introductions, Star would usually shy away. "Um...do you have any idea where we may b-be ?" She asked, nervously looking around the room. She still had no idea about what was going on idea and she hoped that maybe Autumn would.


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Both of you know that you are not all alone right now. But... what now? That's the question flowing through your mind. Suddenly, both of you feel a pain in your hooves, like if you stood on something.. Looking down, you realise that there are keys growing from the ground like flowers, all over the ground.  

 

Quip looked at the ground and tried to avoid the growing keys. "What the flying buck?" he exclaimed, having a harder time than he thought he would trying to keep his hooves from getting hurt. "Any idea's? You have probably been here longer than i have, so where do we go?" 


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As Red finished up with the odd attackers, he thanked his lucky cartridge that they'd all been fairly incompetent fighters. He'd been able to dispatch them with little difficulty.

 

"Okay, box. It has not been fun, but I have figured out a vay out of zis infernal maze. Bye bye!" Thus said, Red tried to use his dimension-jump capability.


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OCs: Standoff and Red Alert, the luckless mercs

 

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Quip looked at the ground and tried to avoid the growing keys. "What the flying buck?" he exclaimed, having a harder time than he thought he would trying to keep his hooves from getting hurt. "Any idea's? You have probably been here longer than i have, so where do we go?" 

 

Addem jumped and danced, attempting not to stand on the sharp-edged keys sprouting from the ground. "Ow! I don't -ah!- know! Try to -ow- pick up a key! Find a door!" He reached down, pulling as best he could on one of the nearer keys while still trying to find a spot to stand.


And I dream of an absolution...

 

 

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Addem jumped and danced, attempting not to stand on the sharp-edged keys sprouting from the ground. "Ow! I don't -ah!- know! Try to -ow- pick up a key! Find a door!" He reached down, pulling as best he could on one of the nearer keys while still trying to find a spot to stand.

 

'Of course, keys to go to a door...' he thought, thinking himself an idiot. "There are too many keys to try, we have to find some efficient way to find the right key. If these keys continue to grow everywhere, I don't know if we will even find the right one" he said as he started to gather some keys.


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"God, yes. I want to get out. I was minding my own business, setting up my shop, when I found a box. I opened it, and now I'm here. And I'm old for, like, no reason at all. If you have any idea of what to do, please, help. There's this TV in the other room, and I need help knowing what it means."

 

 

(First thing: IM SO SO SO SORRY... It took.. a little too long.. I'm sorry... I wasn't in mood to write.. and I'm not strong enough to force myself...

Second thing: Have more of Syd Barrett..)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1TCL2PXEMIE

 

@, @@Addem Up

Both of you know that you are not all alone right now. But... what now? That's the question flowing through your mind.

Suddenly, both of you feel a pain in your hooves, like if you stood on something..

Looking down, you realise that there are keys growing from the ground like flowers, all over the ground.

 

 

 

A bright, strong light suddenly makes you blind.

"Only the strongest will survive..." you hear the whispering.

Your eyes regain their ability to see.

The field is empty. You are the only one in here. Well.. not exactly.

There's a familiar door in front of you.

 

(Congratulations. You finished your first song.)

 

 

 

 

 

@@Nightfall, @

(Nightfall: Keep in mind that you are old now.)

Suddenly, a cabinet in the bathroom opened and a pile of flasks appeared in the bathroom. The well-known flasks that are also all over the sink near the mirror.

You can see a poster inside of the cabinet. It says:

RULES OF USAGE:

1. DON'T OPEN

2. DON'T DRINK

3. DON'T LEAVE

 

 

All you could see was just another darkness. It didn't lead.. nowhere. But before you could turn around, the door disappeared, leaving you in the darkness once again.

There was just a black hall. But then..

You heard a tune. A different, unknown one. But you felt like it was a part of you. You decided to follow the tune and found out that there were some other doors. Or.. more like an arc, not doors.

Running through them, you found yourself in an usual room with a set of chess on the bedside table and a pony in the bed.

 

(You can now interact with Star Song)

 

 

The light in your head started to form. It looked like a small dot in a darkness at first... a moving dot. Moving to you.

As the dot was getting closer, you started to realise that it was a pony. A silhouette of a pony.

You open your eyes. And... there's someone in your room.

 

(You can now interact with Autumn Dream)

"Well, now we got these flasked and a usless instruction manulur but with two minds we should sovle this problum easily!" Ace said optimistic. And hopfully whoever inventedthis crazy CRAZY music box. Ace thought inspecting each flask then the instructions.

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"Well, now we got these flasked and a usless instruction manulur but with two minds we should sovle this problum easily!" Ace said optimistic. And hopfully whoever inventedthis crazy CRAZY music box. Ace thought inspecting each flask then the instructions.

"Agreed. It feels like I was doing science in this world before. Like, as if... I do t know. Apparently, this is my home, but why? In the actual world, I'm a mechanic! Wait... What do both have in common? Maybe there's some link in here... Or maybe I'm going insane. I had been called crazy before, but now it might be true."

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"M-My name is S-star." She said, quietly. Whenever it came to introductions, Star would usually shy away. "Um...do you have any idea where we may b-be ?" She asked, nervously looking around the room. She still had no idea about what was going on idea and she hoped that maybe Autumn would.

"All I remember is being brought her by some strange music box... it was playing such a beautiful tune... I couldn't resist opening it..." Autumn trailed off, her gaze fixed upon the wall, yet it seemed as though she was looking at something else more fascinating than a blank wall.


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"All I remember is being brought her by some strange music box... it was playing such a beautiful tune... I couldn't resist opening it..." Autumn trailed off, her gaze fixed upon the wall, yet it seemed as though she was looking at something else more fascinating than a blank wall.

 

Star gave Autumn a confused look. "You too ? I...I came here the same way...how strange." She said, yawning and stretching her wings. "So...what do we do now ? Should we search for a way out or what ?" She asked, looking around the room, unsure what they should be doing or where they should be going.


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Star gave Autumn a confused look. "You too ? I...I came here the same way...how strange." She said, yawning and stretching her wings. "So...what do we do now ? Should we search for a way out or what ?" She asked, looking around the room, unsure what they should be doing or where they should be going.

Autumn looked around the room for any possible way for her and Star to escape the room.

"I don't think there is any way for us to get out of her, the door i came in through is gone now... there isn't any way to escape." Autumn said with a sigh, lowering her head in depression.


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Fire Runner (Pony)

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