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[chattydash 62]

@Nightfall

 

can i join please, i will play as chattydash, you can call him chatty for short. one question do we have to reply to this RP frequently because i can not reply on weekends. ok i will give a sample of a RP now.

 

chattydash walked into the room, with a bounce in his trot.

chatty: "hay sky, what are you up to, whatever it is stop, look at this". chatty pulled out, a new book he just bought.

sky: "what book is that"?

chatty: chatty looked surprised. "it is the book of how to through an epic party". he shouted with a smile.

sky: "so when are you throughing this epic party then chatty?" sky said sarcasticly, knowing what chatty, was going to say.

chatty: "TONIGHT!!!" chatty yelled animatedly.

 

i made it up i hope it is good

Edited March 19, 2013 by chattydash

[Nightfall 3,950]

can i join please, i will play as chattydash, you can call him chatty for short. one question do we have to reply to this RP frequently because i can not reply on weekends. ok i will give a sample of a RP now.

 

chattydash walked into the room, with a bounce in his trot.

chatty: "hay sky, what are you up to, whatever it is stop, look at this". chatty pulled out, a new book he just bought.

sky: "what book is that"?

chatty: chatty looked surprised. "it is the book of how to through an epic party". he shouted with a smile.

sky: "so when are you throughing this epic party then chatty?" sky said sarcasticly, knowing what chatty, was going to say.

chatty: "TONIGHT!!!" chatty yelled animatedly.

 

i made it up i hope it is good

 

Well, it would be good, but I see one problem with it: the grammar. I have a rule saying you must have good grammar to join, and while technically the grammar may be good in that paragraph, capitalization and correct punctuation are missing for a good deal of it.

On this basis (I'm sorry to say it and I don't want to hurt feelings), I'm going to have to ask you to try to get better at the aforementioned things before reapplying.

Good luck!

[chattydash 62]

@Nightfall

 

Can i join please. I will play as Chattydash, you can call him Chatty for short. One question. Do we have to reply to this RP frequently because I can not reply on weekends. Ok I will give a sample of an RP now.

 

Chattydash walked into the room, with A bounce in his trot.

Chatty: "Hay Sky! What are you up to, whatever it is stop! Look at this". Chatty pulled out A new book he just bought.

Sky: "What book is that"?

Chatty: Chatty looked surprised. "It is the book of how to through an epic party". He shouted with A smile.

Sky: "So when are you, throughing this epic party then, chatty?" Sky said sarcasticly. Knowing what Chatty was going to say.

Chatty: "TONIGHT!!!". Chatty yelled animatedly.

 

I made it up, I hope it is good. Is my grammer better now. I do try my best.

Edited March 19, 2013 by chattydash

[Nightfall 3,950]

Can i join please, I will play as Chattydash, you can call him Chatty for short. One question do we have to reply to this RP frequently because I can not reply on weekends. Ok I will give a sample of a RP now.

 

Chattydash walked into the room, with A bounce in his trot.

Chatty: "Hay Sky, what are you up to, whatever it is stop and look at this". Chatty pulled out, A new book he just bought.

Sky: "What book is that"?

Chatty: Chatty looked surprised. "It is the book of how to through an epic party". He shouted with A smile.

Sky: "So when are you throughing this epic party then chatty?" Sky said sarcasticly, knowing what Chatty, was going to say.

Chatty: "TONIGHT!!!" Chatty yelled animatedly.

 

I made it up, I hope it is good. Is my grammer better now. I do try my best.

 

I'm sorry, but I'm still seeing a number of errors. I'll show you the errors, but will then ask you to please not apply again for a little while.

 

 

May I join please? I will play as Chattydash, but you can call him Chatty for short. One question: do we have to reply to this RP frequently? Because I can not reply on weekends. I will give a sample of a RP now.

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Chattydash walked into the room, with a bounce in his trot.

Chatty: "Hay Sky, what are you up to? Whatever it is stop and look at this". Chatty pulled out, a new book he just bought.

Sky: "What book is that?"

Chatty looked surprised. "It is the book of how to through an epic party". He shouted with a smile.

"So when are you throwing this epic party then, chatty?" Sky asked sarcastically, knowing what Chatty, was going to say.

"TONIGHT!!!" Chatty yelled animatedly.

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I made it up; I hope it is good. Is my grammar better now? I do try my best.

 

And I know you try your best. I really do. I really am sorry to have to do this.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,803]

@,

 

I don't know if you saw or not but Ocean replied to Oril. If you're busy or something, its okay, take your time, I'm just being bored...

[Undyne 1,483]

@,

 

I don't know if you saw or not but Ocean replied to Oril. If you're busy or something, its okay, take your time, I'm just being bored...

Saw it after I posted... :I I can't multiquote on a phone. Don't worry. As soon as someone else posts, I'll get to yours. Or when I get home in a bit.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,803]

Saw it after I posted... :I I can't multiquote on a phone. Don't worry. As soon as someone else posts, I'll get to yours. Or when I get home in a bit.

 

Its all good, Take your time. I'm gonna go off and watch a horror movie in the meantime...yay no sleep tonight.