A story for the gods.

[Expired delta 76]

Now i no what you thinking what's this post about well it's simply a story I've though of since I've watched the first mlp. The story starts off your just a basic person on earth you work a low paying job you have no money no girl friend an no cupcakes. 0_0 one day you watching tv when a light blinds you in front of you stands a magnificent an tall pony.you at first run but you can't move as this giant pony trots tord you a try to scream for help!!! (you)HELP SOMEONE HELP ME THERE'S A PONY IN MY ROOM AN I CAN'T MOVE HELP!!!

But like most poeple would of thought already no one heard you. The pony suddenly put her hoov over your mouth an said shhhhhh. (celestia) please you mustn't let poeple no I'm here I am here to bring you with me for a VERY important missen she fretted to say this as if someone was looking for her. Too be continued

 

So tell me how you feel about this story does it need more I do want to keep going cuz the next chapters get good an explain more of whats going on but I want to hear what you all think first

http://mlpforums.com/topic/5395-a-story-for-the-gods-part-two-bye-name62/

 

Do note that this a on going story I will post on my main page as I make the story

 

Main page as in profile

Edited February 1, 2012 by Name62

[Aureity 3,055]

Erm...you can't really judge a story based on an idea. I've seen hopeless ideas give rise to the most awe-inspiring stores under the nurturing care of a brilliant writer, and magnificent ideas crumble to dust under an inept writer's hand. The idea sounds intriguing, but we'd need a little bit, maybe the first few pages, to judge the story.

[Starshine 16,330]

 

Why would Celestia...

 

But it can be a rather interesting fic I guess

[Prince Lightning Da Cute 616]

I was listening to spme dramatic music as i read this so that helped, Cool story my Friend please contiune! but you might wanna add more time inbetween your threads some of the Old guards start to take offence.

 

Erm...you can't really judge a story based on an idea. I've seen hopeless ideas give rise to the most awe-inspiring stores under the nurturing care of a brilliant writer, and magnificent ideas crumble to dust under an inept writer's hand. The idea sounds intriguing, but we'd need a little bit, maybe the first few pages, to judge the story.

 

 

Why would Celestia...

 

But it can be a rather interesting fic I guess

 

Double Ninja!!! :ph34r:

[Expired delta 76]

Erm...you can't really judge a story based on an idea. I've seen hopeless ideas give rise to the most awe-inspiring stores under the nurturing care of a brilliant writer, and magnificent ideas crumble to dust under an inept writer's hand. The idea sounds intriguing, but we'd need a little bit, maybe the first few pages, to judge the story.

 

Yes I agree well i goes I pump out the next chapter it should be ready in about a few I have the story written out in my brain it's just getting the words to fit that take long