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"I don't quite know what's playing either," Catherine said as she sipped her wine. "But I think you should choose when we get there." Soon the waiter came back with their food, Cat thanked him again, and started eating. "So what about you? Did you have any girls before me?"

"Well, aside from silly high school relationships that were rather short lived," he responded, "I never really had myself a real girlfriend. I don't know, maybe I'm just too busy, I'm not the greatest looking guy around, or a combination of the two. Either way my last date was actually back in freshman year of high school."


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“We need go see the Chief of the Lancaster County Police in Manheim, Penn and ask him who pick up your friend Twilight and we can go to the address and find her.” Charles saying as he was driving to Manheim and to the Lancaster County Police HQ. So they can talk to the chief of the police. Then looking at Rarity and smiles to her.

 

"Oh, I do hope that this Chief can help us," Rarity replied. "I so want to be able to find my friends." She hoped with all her heart that this Chief was going to turn out to be what she needed to find Twilight.

 

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"Murray and I were pretty much finished as far as shopping goes," Cicada said. "Maybe we could go get something to eat before we meet you guys later."

 


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Fluttershy practically winced. It had been a terrible idea! What had she been thinking? Now she was going to ruin her relationship with all her new friends!

Well, she could do something to save it. "I'm sorry," she muttered through her hair, a knee-jerk reaction. "I'm really, really sorry."

 

What was she apologizing for, exactly? For unwanted affection? Or for falling for someone in the first place? Fluttershy had an unfortunate tendency to be rather...fatalistic about romance. Ponies with her demeanor, she knew, were rarely very successful in asking another pony out. At least she was aware of her weakness. And it wasn't like she wasn't right. Why would she be upset or mad unless she didn't like Fluttershy at all?
But she'd known that. She'd just wanted a chance to show her how she cared anyway. Selfish, Fluttershy, selfish.

 

Putting her hands to her face to hold back tears, because she knew they wouldn't help, Fluttershy glanced at the clock It was 11 by the time she got back. That left enough time to get ready if she wanted to...

"Um, Magneus?" she asked. "Aly will be back soon. If you guys can give us some time alone I'll--I'll talk to her about it, okay?"


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Arcane was a bit... confused. "Would it be okay if i didn't know what you were saying? Or did my hearing get jumbled on the way down..." he thought. Clearly this creature was trying to communicate with him... it sounded like normal Equestrian, but the letters mixed around. He took a moment to clear his head and look around again. His body didn't feel... right. He looked down at himself, seeing that he was transformed into one of these... creatures. "Thats just great..." he mumbled and tried moving one of his arms. It was strange to move a limb in a way he never had before. This appendage could bend to the side and up to his face. He looked at his lower half. These things resembled legs and hooves more, but it didn't end in a small oval, this was a much bigger and lopsided oval. The legs bent the same way, so it was easier to deal with them. From the reference he got from the creature before, he had to stand on two legs and not four. "Thats going to be a pain and a half" he said and tried to use his arms to push himself up on to his feet.

 

After failing multiple times, he finally got up on his feet! Aaaand then lost his balance and fell down. "This is going to be harder than i thought..."

 

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Magneus nodded slowly and stood up, moving around the couch and onto his sleeping pad where he laid down to try and fall asleep in time from Aly getting home.

 

~After an hour~

 

Alex unlocked the front door and walked inside, gesturing Aly to go in first. Aly sighed and walked in, trying to be quiet so she didn't wake anyone up. Alex went inside behind her but immediately went into his room once he reached his bedroom door.


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Rainbow speed-red the messages. Oh. Like mail. "Not totally, crazy, huh?" she deadpanned, just a bit of a crack in her voice. "Glad to know."
Then she saw it looked like someone had found Twilight, and grabbed the laptop. "WHAT!?!?? She's here TOO!"

Rainbow put a hand on her head. Oh, buck. This meant she wasn't the only one this mess had happened to. This meant...what if everypony was here? "Oh, this is not good."


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"Were you looking for completely crazy??" Colette teased. Showing her knowledge of the other Ponies, Colette asked, "Who's Twilight??" After shaking her head at the dumb question, she added, "We gotta send "Angie" a message back, to see if she's telling the truth." Colette then took the laptop back and began to type "Hey, Rainbow? Tell me more about Twilight. Maybe this Angie can corroborate what you know."

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@~Flame Dancer~,  (I used google translate just so i could find out what she really said ._.')   Arcane was a bit... confused. "Would it be okay if i didn't know what you were saying? Or did my hearing get jumbled on the way down..." he thought. Clearly this creature was trying to communicate with him... it sounded like normal Equestrian, but the letters mixed around. He took a moment to clear his head and look around again. His body didn't feel... right. He looked down at himself, seeing that he was transformed into one of these... creatures. "Thats just great..." he mumbled and tried moving one of his arms. It was strange to move a limb in a way he never had before. This appendage could bend to the side and up to his face. He looked at his lower half. These things resembled legs and hooves more, but it didn't end in a small oval, this was a much bigger and lopsided oval. The legs bent the same way, so it was easier to deal with them. From the reference he got from the creature before, he had to stand on two legs and not four. "Thats going to be a pain and a half" he said and tried to use his arms to push himself up on to his feet.   After failing multiple times, he finally got up on his feet! Aaaand then lost his balance and fell down. "This is going to be harder than i thought..."

 

((She said "WHAT THE HELL" Then "Oh my god. are you alright, sir? I'm also using google translate. She's speaking french...))

 

Emily realized that the boy probably didn't know french. She watched him try to stand...and fall. "Sorry sir I thought you were french. Are you alright? What appened...where did you come from?" She asked, looking up at the sky...then back down at the boy. "Did...did you fall? No no...zat wouldn't explain ze light...and noise..." She scratched her chin before she ran over to her bags and grabbed a blanket, walking back over and holding out her hands to help him up a few moments later.

 

 

"I should have all the things you need to make pesto, yeah. I'm looking forward to it. So Genevieve, huh? It's a good name, it seems appropriate for a violin. The cashier is up front, follow me." He headed towards the front of the store, motioning for her to follow.

 

Star took one more look at the other violin's before she followed behind Liam. "Yep. I like naming my instruments...and I have always wanted to name one Genevieve." She said, holding the violin and bow in one hand so she could hold Liam's hand with the other.


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Star took one more look at the other violin's before she followed behind Liam. "Yep. I like naming my instruments...and I have always wanted to name one Genevieve." She said, holding the violin and bow in one hand so she could hold Liam's hand with the other.

 

Liam felt a rush of warmth going through his body as she held his hand. They arrived at the register and Liam quickly payed for the violin. "Alright, do you want to look around here a little more, and see more human instruments, or are you ready to go move on to something else?" 


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"Oh, I do hope that this Chief can help us," Rarity replied. "I so want to be able to find my friends." She hoped with all her heart that this Chief was going to turn out to be what she needed to find Twilight.

 

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"Murray and I were pretty much finished as far as shopping goes," Cicada said. "Maybe we could go get something to eat before we meet you guys later."

 

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They arrive at the Lancaster County Police HQ in Manheim, while he parks his car then getting out while head to the passenger side and let Rarity out. “Here you go love.” Then he waiting for her to come into the building and they can talk to the Chief of Police see who pick up Twilight and were this officer live so they can head there.

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'French? The tartarus is that?' he was a bit confused.  "Uh... i'm quite alright. I don't know if i fell or just appeared here. Both seem unlikely" he said and grabbed her hand, with her assistance he was able to stand upright without falling over. "Thank you" he said and brushed himself off. "Any idea where this is?" he asked.


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Rainbow watched the message-sending go on, and Colette's keystrokes, carefully as she narrated. "Eh, well, lessee'...she's purple, kinda' on the round side, pink streak in her mane....vision's not perfect, but she won't wear glasses or anything...oh yeah, and she's a total egghead. Give her a stack of books and you could lose her for days. So be careful." She waved an arm in the air. "Matter of fact, this might not be so bad. She's so smart, she's probably already figured out what's happening and found a way to get us home."

 

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Fluttershy heard the door open at midnight, and though she'd tried to plan, she couldn't keep her face from turning immediately red. She was wearing her first outfit--freshly pressed, of course. Her yellow sundress, all the way down to the buckled shoes. She didn't want to be wearing Aly's clothes right now. That would be weird. Besides, she had a few euros saved up now, enough that she could buy at least a couple outfits of her own. She'd probably have to.

"Um...Aly?" Fluttershy poked her head out from behind the kitchen doorway. And chided herself; that was not all how she'd planned on saying hello. This shouldn't be so scary.

Alex was out, apparently, so Fluttershy made herself come out to greet her. She couldn't look Aly in the eye. "I'm really sorry about this," she murmured. "I shouldn't have done that. I mean, I really shouldn't have, but I just..." oh come on, Fluttershy. She could get it out. "When I didn't have any idea what was going on you were all really nice to me, and I loved the way you always smiled at me every morning, even if I tried to make some horrible breakfast you all hated, and..." She reached into her pockets. "I don't show a lot of ponies, but I like to draw a little--it was one of the reasons I started birdwatching when I was little. Normally I draw animals, but when I first got here I didn't know what to draw, and I wanted to practice some so I could get used to using hands..." she showed Aly the sketch she'd made of her.

It was only done in pencil, and in Fluttershy's view, it didn't even remotely portray Aly correctly. It was pretty lifeless by comparison, actually. "I...you can...throw it away if you want. I mean--well I didn't mean--" Ugh, she was falling apart. Why didn't anything she wanted to say come out right? What did she want, anyway? Things she didn't dare hope for


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'French? The tartarus is that?' he was a bit confused.  "Uh... i'm quite alright. I don't know if i fell or just appeared here. Both seem unlikely" he said and grabbed her hand, with her assistance he was able to stand upright without falling over. "Thank you" he said and brushed himself off. "Any idea where this is?" he asked.

 

Emily placed the blanket over his shoulders before replying. "Um...Montreal...Quebec." She said. "It's freezing out...your clothes are so thin. Come wiz me and we can get some tea." She said, giggling slightly at the rhyme. She placed his hand against the wall for support before walking back over to get her bags. She placed her dufflebag on top of the suitcase before walking back over to the man. "Take my 'and." She said, holding out her hand. "What is your name?"

 

 

Liam felt a rush of warmth going through his body as she held his hand. They arrived at the register and Liam quickly payed for the violin. "Alright, do you want to look around here a little more, and see more human instruments, or are you ready to go move on to something else?" 

 

Star shrugged. "I'm happy to do whatever." She said, watching the girl behind the counter put the violin into a case. Star couldn't help but stare at the girl's hair...it was so colorful. And obviously dyed but Star didn't know that. "You're mane is beautiful." She said, smiling at the girl who gave Star a weird look before looking at Liam. "Um...thank you?" She said, placing the violin on the counter. "I didn't mean to offend you...it's just very pretty." She said, taking the violin. The girl blushed slightly but she still had a quizzical expression. "You're very kind...uh...have a good day..." She said.


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Aly smiled and took the sketch. She examined it briefly before looking back up at Fluttershy. "Fluttershy, it may not be the most beautiful thing, but i love it. You know why? Because you made it, and that makes it special... I'm sorry Fluttershy. You have to know that we can't be together..." she said sadly and handed back the sketch. "You know how i said there was religion on Earth?... Well, i take part of that as well. I'm a Christian, and Christianism doesn't support same gender love. I hope you understand..." she said and started to walk to her room, hoping nothing else had to be said. It was truly sad, and Aly felt terrible. She didn't want Fluttershy to feel bad, but what could she do?... 

 

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(I least I have these posts to counter my sad feelings from Fluttershy...)

 

Arcane smiled and took a hold of her hand. After he was asked his name, he wondered if he should really tell... 'Well... she is rather nice... what's not to trust?'. "I'm Arcane. But uh... where exactly is Montreal Quebec? I've never heard of it" he asked. He was rather enjoying the blanket she put over him.

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Emily gave him a quizzical look. "Canada...which is part of earth." She said. "Where are you from?" She asked, leading him down the alley towards her apartment building. "My name is Emily Williams by ze way. Arcane, eh? Zat is an interesting name." She said, leading him out to a deserted street.


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Arcane looked around, the place seemed... dead almost. Void of all life and waiting to be swept away with the winds... Maybe it was because it was late and he couldn't see very well. "Uh... I'm from Ponyville..." he said, hoping she was taking him someplace warm. "So uh... where exactly is earth... on this planet? And why have i turned into..." he looked down at his body and gestured to all of him "This?"

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Arcane looked around, the place seemed... dead almost. Void of all life and waiting to be swept away with the winds... Maybe it was because it was late and he couldn't see very well. "Uh... I'm from Ponyville..." he said, hoping she was taking him someplace warm. "So uh... where exactly is earth... on this planet? And why have i turned into..." he looked down at his body and gestured to all of him "This?"

 

Emily raised an eyebrow. "Where is earth? Earth is this planet. And...what do you mean by that? Were you not a human before whatever just happened?" She asked, leading him across the street, passed a few car's to a large apartment building...that looked rather old.


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"Well, aside from silly high school relationships that were rather short lived," he responded, "I never really had myself a real girlfriend. I don't know, maybe I'm just too busy, I'm not the greatest looking guy around, or a combination of the two. Either way my last date was actually back in freshman year of high school."

She put her hand on top of his and looked deeply into his eyes. "I'm sure you were just busy, because, while you are not the best looking guy in the world, you are very handsome. And on top of that, you seem very sweet. Any girl would be lucky to have you." She smiled at him and said, "Now don't forget to enjoy your wine."


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Arcane shrugged. "Last i checked i was a pony, not a 'human'. And this can't be 'earth' because this planet is... well, uh... i remember somepony telling me but now i can't remember. All i know is that it wasn't called earth, thats for sure" he said with a nod. The building they were heading to looked like something he saw in Canterlot, but it was obviously aged and worn down a bit.


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She put her hand on top of his and looked deeply into his eyes. "I'm sure you were just busy, because, while you are not the best looking guy in the world, you are very handsome. And on top of that, you seem very sweet. Any girl would be lucky to have you." She smiled at him and said, "Now don't forget to enjoy your wine."

Jack took hold of her soft, tender hand, whe he realized he hadn't sipped his wine yet! He took a drink of it, and for his first wine, was quite surprsed on how well it tasted. "Any girl would be lucky to end up with me. All I need to do is find her," Jack responded. Jack was attracted to her, but he didn't want to rush things too quickly. It was their first date, after all.

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They arrive at the Lancaster County Police HQ in Manheim, while he parks his car then getting out while head to the passenger side and let Rarity out. “Here you go love.” Then he waiting for her to come into the building and they can talk to the Chief of Police see who pick up Twilight and were this officer live so they can head there.

 

Rarity brushed down her skirt and ran a comb thru her hair before following Charles into the strange building. She felt a bit nervous about going inside, but it was to find her friends so she knew she'd be able to do it. And, of course, she was with Charles so it couldn't be all bad.

 


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"Got it..." Colette said as she typed. "Will Twilight mind if you call her egghead??"

 

>>Hey, Angie! I got your message! I wanted to make sure you were really talking about the real Twilight, so I had Rainbow describe her for me. She says that Twilight's purple, kind of on the round side (her words, not mine!) and has a pink streak in her mane. She also says her vision's not perfect, but won't wear glasses or anything, and called Twilight an egghead, and she can get lost for days of you give her a stack of books, so be careful.

 

If you ask me, Rainbow's getting a little attached to my laptop, so there's the pot calling the kettle black! But you didn't hear that from me! (And no, I didn't show her anything bad!)

 

Rainbow added that Twilight's really smart and has probably figured out what's going on and has probably figured out a way to get the Ponies home. This is most likely an assumption, though.

 

Still, it would be awesome if she did find a way for them all to get home! But first, we have to see if there any other Pony got here...

 

Well, before that, I want you to prove that you really found Twilight by sending me the picture your friend sent you. I don't want get my or Rainbow's hopes up, so I'd like to see what Twilight looks like. I'll get a good picture of Rainbow if you show us Twilight!

 

And since you gave your location, I'll give you mine. I live in Racine, Wisconsin.

 

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It was then Colette heard the washer stop. "Opp, be right back!" She said as she set the laptop down, heading back to the laundry room. "Don't touch the laptop!"

 

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Rarity brushed down her skirt and ran a comb thru her hair before following Charles into the strange building. She felt a bit nervous about going inside, but it was to find her friends so she knew she'd be able to do it. And, of course, she was with Charles so it couldn't be all bad.

 

 Charles went to the desk, then he took out his NSA Badge and show it to the desk clerk since it stander procedure. “Hello is your chief of police here? I need talk to him and it urgent now.” Charles saying as he looking making sure Rarity is safe and he looking back to the desk clerk see if he will call him.

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Fluttershy followed. "I...not really..." There had been plenty of things Magneus had explained to her that still made little sense; how ponies or people could get by without immortal guides had been one of them, and Magnes' explanation of humanity's status there had been a bit bewildering. "But...I get it if you don't like me. That's...that's okay. I guess I knew that all along.

But please don't be mad at me!" Fluttershy clasped her hands in front of her. "You guys are basically my only friends here...I just won't be able to stand it if you stop talking to me, or you're really awkward. Can we still be friends? And I really mean it."
 

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"Yeah, sure thing." Rainbow waited until Colette was in the shower, than started taking a peek around. This mouse thing was still weird, but she was starting the get the picture. The computer was organized like a physical space; it reminded her of something Twilight had talked about doing once, a technique for organizing your thoughts like a physical space so you could remember things easier, or something...one of those rambles when she'd thought Dash wasn't actually paying attention.

So where to go? Dash tried to find her way to that message board, figuring that she should give who Colette had been mailing a corrective course in Dash-awesomery. But she couldn't find her way back. Grr, it couldn't be simple...

Well, there had to be something cool around, if Colette thought they were all so awesome. She looked through the little pictures on the background. Each one was a 'file' Colette had said, which Rainbow understood to mean...well, they were some sort of thing. What to click on? Some of them looked boring, but a few near the bottom rows looked like they might be about cool stuff. Like the one with the skull that said 'Gears of War'. That sounded pretty intense.
She leaned back when the light on the screen went black, before eerie noises began to appear....

 

When Colette came out of the shower, she found Rainbow frantically hunched over the laptop, with high-volume gufire blaring all around her, and screaming. "Take that, alien scum! That'll teach you to mess with Earth! And THAT one's for Carmine!" There ay or may not have been tears in her eyes. She ducked vicariously... "How do I use that stupid grenade again?"


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Jack took hold of her soft, tender hand, whe he realized he hadn't sipped his wine yet! He took a drink of it, and for his first wine, was quite surprsed on how well it tasted. "Any girl would be lucky to end up with me. All I need to do is find her," Jack responded. Jack was attracted to her, but he didn't want to rush things too quickly. It was their first date, after all.

"Yeah. You never know, you might have already found her. She could be right under your nose." Catherine gave him a sly grin, pulled her hand back, and went back to eating. She really hoped this man was as good as he seemed. Maybe he just needs to loosen up a bit. The wine should help with that if he drinks just enough.


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Aly smiled and nodded. "Just cause i won't give you the affection you want, doesn't mean we can still be good friends. I wouldn't be able to stay mad at you for very long even if i was mad. But Fluttershy, i'm-" she paused to yawn. "I'm really tired... I need to sleep. But before i do, there is stuff i need to talk about, Magneus stuff..." she said and directed Fluttershy to the couch. "I know you know i like him, but thats not the point of this talk" she said and sat down.


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