Jump to content
Banner by ~ Wizard

private never again... the RP


repsol rave

Recommended Posts

(edited)

Pinkie was on the verge of tears until she couldnt hold it in anymore She was trying to be a trooper like her dad on the rock farm, but Pinkie felt the water works coming. "AWWWWWWWWWWWW" Pinkie sobbed "I was just trying to help twilight, so why did you hit me, What did I do. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW" Pinkie sobbed even more

 

A couple of moments later, William awoke to the pink horse sobbing. Fusturated, he opened the door with out looking at his new body and yelled. "Will you shut up you incompetant Pesents!!"

Edited by Mr. Changeling

mrchabngelingwhatamatcha_zps0ba69862.png


 


Credit

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Replies 97
  • Created
  • Last Reply

Top Posters In This Topic

@, ((I think we time skipped a bit cuz we're already at Ponyville :) ))

 

"HEY! Calm down man!" Volt grabbed Issac and pulled him back. He turned him around and got a little closer to him. "What the hell was that?! I think you really hurt her!" Volt ran over to Pinkie and started helping her up. "Hey it's ok. Sorry about what just happened. My name's... Volt Switch. I'm assuming you're Pinkie?"

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(edited)

"shit.. i dont know man" isaac repleid to volt. "i'm not very fond to being touched."

he walked over to the pink pony, but was interrupted by  a scream coming from a large tree wich appeared to have a house in it.

 

 "Will you all shut up you incompetant pesents" a red creature bellowed out the tree's front door.

 

isaac immideatly recognised the voice and sprinted over to the changeling. when he was close enough, he bucked the changeling to the ground and started to ram him on his head with his forehooves.

"you- fuckin'- basterd!-i'm-going-to-fuckin'-kill-you!" isaac said, each word nicely accented by a loud *thud* as a hoof landed on the changeling's head.

Edited by repsol rave

 

My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal  

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Yah, my name is Pinkie Pie (sniff), and your name is Volt? (Sniff) thats a cool name, how did you get it, was it from your cutie mark" Pinkie Pie quickly sprung up and started talking about her cuty mark. "Well my cutey mark is from all the partys i do, but my name is because im pink" Pinkie smilled until her ribs stung with pain. "Ow, i think im really hurt."


mrchabngelingwhatamatcha_zps0ba69862.png


 


Credit

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Fluttershy squeaked as the red changeling shouted at them. She hid behind Twilight, who was trying to comfort Pinkie Pie.

"Pinkie, are you okay? Did something break?" She glared at Isaac, then at the Changeling poking his head out the library door.

Wait... Library door?!

Twilight switched spots with Fluttershy and angrily cantered up to the entrance of Golden Oaks Library.

"Hey, what are you doing in MY library?! You had better not be messing up my ink collection or bookshelves. Spike and I just reorganized today!" Twilight Sparkle stomped a hoof on the ground as she glared at him.

 

 

 

(It's okay. I'm not mad. I was mostly just notifying you of the fact that controlling characters that aren't yours is widely looked down upon.)

Link to comment
Share on other sites

William rolled out of the beating and quickly said "Troops, kill this damn piece of shit" when nothing happend, he yelled again "TROOPS" William looked behind him to see he was completly alone. William didnt know what was going on, but he knew what was about to happen. He gulped in absolute fear.


mrchabngelingwhatamatcha_zps0ba69862.png


 


Credit

Link to comment
Share on other sites

isaac walked up to the changeling, towering above him.

"nobody can save you now, you russian piece of SHIT!" as he said the last word, he lifted both of his front hooves and sent the flying to the changelings hindlegs. 

the changeling's left hindleg snapped like a twig under isaac's weight.

isaac'satisfied with his work, turned around and yelled to volt.

"hey volt! this is the basterd that killed me!"


 

My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal  

Link to comment
Share on other sites

William was in excusiating pain. He thought about just laying there for his death. Then he caught sight of a purple horse by the entrance. William swore he could hear doves. He couldnt explain it, but he remember at that moment a phrase he hadnt used in a long time:love at first sight. William clambered to stand up to impress the purple horse out of bravry. If he was going down, he was going down a man ... Changeling..... Changeling man, whatever.


mrchabngelingwhatamatcha_zps0ba69862.png


 


Credit

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Twilight cringed as Isaac broke the Changeling's hind leg. As Isaac trotted out, she went over to the stallion.

"Ouch, are you okay? Your leg doesn't look quite right, and it sounded like it hurt. I know I shouldn't be talking to aChangeling, but... I can't just leave you with a hurt leg. "

Link to comment
Share on other sites

William couldnt believe it, she was talking to him. He didnt know what to say, he was speechless. Words finally caught up to him. "I fine,s not like that roach hurt me. Im a pretty durable guy" trying to impress the purple horse. william stood up, he quickly fell to the ground, losing what was left of his reputation. Then, he looked at himself. William screamed, started hyperventalating and then fianlly passed out.


mrchabngelingwhatamatcha_zps0ba69862.png


 


Credit

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(edited)

"haha! look at that little bitch faint!"isaac said, pointing a hoof in the changelings direction.

he was completely overjoyed with meeting his killer. he had beaten the living crap out of him, and there wasn't a feeling more satisfying in the world.

"i bet this is the worst he ever got through! let's make him go through the same shit he made me go through." 

isaac said, his muzzle sporting a nearly psychotic smile. his eyes filled with anger as he stared to the changeling once more.

Edited by repsol rave

 

My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal  

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(edited)

Twilight watched as the Changeling tried to stand on his hind legs and fell. She tried to help him when he started hyperventilating but couldn't do anything. When he passed out, she sighed and levitated him into the air, then let him rest in her bed.

Twilight went back downstairs and trotted over to Isaac.

 

"What the hay is WRONG with you? First, you hurt my friend, now you're breaking some random stallion's hind legs? I realize that it may be different in 'your world', but we DON'T do stuff like that in Equestria. I don't know why I haven't sent a letter to the Princess about you yet. Consider yourself lucky. "

She turned to Fluttershy and Pinkie.

"Can you two wait inside while I go get a doctor for Pinkie and that guy?"

Then, she addressed Volt Switch.

"Can I trust you? I certainly hope so. It would be great if you could keep my friends here safe from Isaac. I don't trust him after what just happened."

Edited by Silent Dawn
Link to comment
Share on other sites

(edited)

"wait, you are getting angry at me?"isaac was completely dumbfounded by this.

"do you realize what that guy you just put in your house did to me? he tortured me! he made me his slave! and he is the one that EXECUTED me! and you are getting mad at me!?" isaac was nou panting heavily.

 

"you know what? i'm done. i'm out of this crazy village!" isaac turned around and started for the everfree forest again.

as he trotted away, he couldn't help but feel like he made a big mistake. but he kept on going. 

he gulped once when he went into the dark forest again.

 

( i made this in the story so you can all continue when i'm gone. i'm going to my friends birthday party tonight so i won't be able to post. i'll be back tomorrow though!)

Edited by repsol rave

 

My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal  

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(OOC: Holy crap you guys posted a lot. You ain't making it easy for me to jump in here...who's supposed to find me? I could use RD but I really don't want to have a long conversation with myself...and you seem to have something going on in town already...I will post what I can but you guys gotta give me an opening here please. :/)

 

As Nova collapsed, his world once again turned to black. Only this time, he felt like he was falling. Falling into an endless pit. His 'freefall' lasted for several minutes, before he reached the 'bottom', where he arrived in Equestria. After an hour, he woke up and tried to comprehend his surroundings. It was a complete sensory overload. Nova found himself in a grassy field, that stretched for a good kilometer in every direction. Beyond that were forests with a varied amount of foliage, and then beyond those were great snow-capped mountains that towered above the valley he was in. It was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. Even though he was alone, he felt...content. This was a strange feeling for Nova, but he was gonna enjoy every single minute of it.

 

(OOC: I've purposely left this open-ended so I can see what you guys have got before I continue...)


gen_sig.png

Signature artwork by Magfen. Profile picture by @Princess Silky

Link to comment
Share on other sites

William was a strolling through the blood covered park. He didnt know why he was there, he didnt know how he got there. He finally arrived at an original scene, where he had executed the rebels. And he saw a familiar person: his dad. William started running towards him, but his dad pushed him away. "How could you do this"" he said. William was speechless. "How could you kill all these inocent people. they had children, they had mothers and fathers who loved them, and you killed them for what. to conquer!" William started to cry "I just wanted to make you proud" "How, by killing the good name of Russia and ruining these peoples lives?" "Dad plea-" William's dad interupted "You are no son of mine." William started to cry harder "I was hoping i could see you in heaven some day. I guess i was wrong. I hope you enjoy the rest of eternity burning in Hell" at that he left. "Dad, DAD!!!" William yelled. He collapsed to the growned and started crying harder. After ten minutes, William crawled over to he man that had killed Mant and said "Im sorry. Im so sorry!" after five minutes of apologizing, the corpse said in the low voice "You will be" then he lunged for William and started to choke him. At that, William woke up. He was still in Equestria but on a bed. William, after 30 some years, did something he thought he could never do again: He cried!


mrchabngelingwhatamatcha_zps0ba69862.png


 


Credit

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(@@GeneralDirection I can have Flutters or Lyra find you, if you want. I could get Flutters go back to her cottage and find you near the Forest or think something up for Lyra.(BTW, completely unrelated, but I love your avatar. Go Canterda/Canada!))

 

Fluttershy helped Pinkie into the library. Twilight watched as the door closed behind them, then started galloping to the town centre, where she knew she would be able to get a doctor. She arrived soon, and didnt even stop running as she used her magic to open the door. She skidded to a halt right at the reception desk, out of breath. The receptionist looked up at her, worried.

"Heh-hello mam... I uh... There are two injured ponies... At the library... They need help."

"Of course, miss. I'll send a doctor. You can head back."

Twilight finally caught her breath and smiled weekly at the receptionist.

"Thank you."

 

Trotting out of the clinic, Twilight looked around and set off one way, hoping to find a certain unicorn that she thought might just know what was going on.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(edited)

Pinkie Pie was still tramatized by the earlier events. She was scared that volt would react the same as that crazy pony did, but then she remember how nice he was when she was injured. She wanted to know more about Volt Switch, but was also a bit fightend. In the end curiosity won over fear. "So, Volt Switch, f i didnt know any better, i would say you were knew hear" Pinkie said trying to keep her cool. "Where are you from ?" (This will probably be my last post for today or maybe later tonight. Im going to this thing for my dad's work. See you either tonight or tommorow. )

Edited by Mr. Changeling

mrchabngelingwhatamatcha_zps0ba69862.png


 


Credit

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Volt had been speechless up until this point. He looked at Pinkie and tried to think of an answer to her question. "Um... somewhere far away from here. Um, excuse me for a moment." Volt turned and went to see Issac. "Issac i get what this guy did to you and I understand how you feel, but I think you're taking the the wrong way. I can see that your... a little violent. These guys aren't use to that. I get that you were furious at him, but you need to think these through. Just... take my advice. Please."

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(@@GeneralDirection I can have Flutters or Lyra find you, if you want. I could get Flutters go back to her cottage and find you near the Forest or think something up for Lyra.(BTW, completely unrelated, but I love your avatar. Go Canterda/Canada!))

(OOC: Either one would be great, I will leave it up to you, and thanks, great to meet another BC brony! Now apparently I have a character limit to reach...)

 

Nova closed his eyes and took a deep breath, greedily drinking in the sweet smelling air. He couldn't remember the last time he had been by himself and completely care-free. Solitude had been such a luxury on Earth, but here it seemed to be available in abundance. I could really get used to this! He thought. But something didn't seem quite right, and as he looked down at the lush green grass in front of him, his cobalt blue eyes widened when he saw that he no longed had hands, but hooves, and they were a brilliant blue colour. So bright they could almost be passed for cyan. Nova slowly turned his head and looked at his back, which was not only a rich blue, but sported a new pair of wings, too. He blinked a few times in confusion. I'm a...pegasus? He asked himself in disbelief. This last realization was too much for Nova to handle, and at that, he promptly fainted. 


gen_sig.png

Signature artwork by Magfen. Profile picture by @Princess Silky

Link to comment
Share on other sites

((Go to sleep on day and I'm way behind)) Jack woke up in the middle of a forest and looked at his surroundings. "This doesn't look familiar...and I thought I was dead" Jack said as he got up but fell down then saw he was a pony. "What the hell happened to me" Jack. Said as he stood up like a pony would. "I need to leave this forest and see if any one knows where I am"


EDWq5TC.png
Signature by the amazing:MiniKirby123

Link to comment
Share on other sites

((Bon-Bon is an NPC, as she is usually with Lyra, I'll just use her for this post.

 

Fluttershy helped Pinkie get settled and looked in a random book, avoiding having to talk to Volt Switch, or the doctor for that matter.

When he asked for the other patient, halfway through fixing Pinkie up, she flew up and gently had quietly opened the bedroom door

 

"Um, Mister... Um, the doctor's here... He'll be up soon. Oh, um, Twilight should be back soon."

She looked at the red changeling and was shocked to see tears on his cheeks.

 


 

 

Twilight found Lyra talking with Bon-Bon at the park, sitting in her usual posture.

 

"Uh, hi Lyra, Bon-Bon. Lyra, I need to talk to you."

"Oh, hi Twilight. What do you need to talk about?"

"Uh... well... humans."

"Ohh, not you too!" Bon-Bon groaned. Lyra glared at her,

"Ignore her. So, humans." Lyra feigned an indifferent expression. She didnt want to show how excited she was that somepony might actually believe her.

"Uh, yes, humans... I thought that maybe you could teach me about them. About their world. Because I heard you like to learn about them."

"More like is obsessed with learning about them. It's all she ever talks about."Bon-Bon interjected, but she was ignored.

Lyra grinned brightly and jumped off the bench. She stood up on her hind legs and made a "Yesssss! motion with a forehoof.

"Yes! Finally, somepony else who's at least interested! Of course I'll teach you about the humans. What sparked this new interest of yours?"

"Uhh, well, I met one. Three, actually. I was hoping you would know how they got here."

Lyra dropped to all fours and frowned, embarrassment making her cheeks red..

"Oh. I see. You're just making fun of me because I like humans! Just like everypony else. Ha-ha, real funny."

"No! Why would you think-"

"Save your breath. Let's go, Bon-Bon."

The two friends started walking away, and they both looked back at Twilight to glare at her.

 

Twilight sighed and started walking back to the library. She saw that the doctor was already here. She trotted up to Pinkie Pie and Volt Switch.

"Hi, Pinkie. How are you feeling?"

 


 

"Hey, you're not still upset about that stupid joke that twilight tried to pull, are you?"

"Oh, that? No... I'm used to ponies thinking I'm weird or crazy. And making fun of me. I'll be okay."

"Okay. Well, I promised Mrs. Cake I'd help out at Sugarcube Corner, so I gotta go. Bye!"

" Bye."

Lyra watched Bon-Bon canter away, and wandered aimlessly as her friend got out of sight.

Why wasn't anypony interested? Some ponies believed in ghosts and zombponies and vamponies, so why not humans?

She wandered aimlessly and ended up near a small park that not many ponies went to it was deserted.

Deserted, except for one bright blue stallion that was passed out on the ground.

Lyra galloped over and looked around. She didnt know what to do when somepony fainted! Nopony else was there. She put a hoof on his shoulder and asked, hoping that he was at least somewhat conscious, "Hey... Are you okay??"

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(edited)

Nova was suddenly jolted awake from another long blackout, half-expecting to wake up back on Earth. But clearly, he was still on...whatever this new world was called, much to his relief. He looked up and found himself staring into the concerned orange eyes of an aquamarine unicorn. Nova shook his head in an effort to wake himself up, further messing up his already wild mane, which was mostly black as night, with several streaks of cobalt blue throughout. Well, it appears I'll be staying here for a while, might as well try to enjoy myself while I'm here. He thought to himself.

 

"Ahhh...hey. I'm...um...not doin' so hot. It's not every day you're executed by your worst enemy that you've been running from all your life, and then show up in a new world as a pegasus." He weakly grinned. He tried his best to focus on the pony talking to him, but would frequently zone out and then refocus again. "So what's your...um...name? Yea, that. Name. Would you also mind telling me just where it is that I am?"

Edited by GeneralDirection

gen_sig.png

Signature artwork by Magfen. Profile picture by @Princess Silky

Link to comment
Share on other sites

(edited)

William looked up to see the yellow pegasus staring at him. "Dont even bother" William said with slow content. "Just leave me to die. It is the least that I disserve." William looked out the window. He had never seen such a beautiful night before. The moon was glistening with a light that could rival the suns beauty as the wind whistled through the grass. It was a beautiful sight, a sight that would make any pony at home and soothed, except for William. What he saw was a jem he couldnt afford. He had done so many horrid disgusting things. Why would, out of every body, he be chosen to live such a luxurious life. He didnt disserve it. He didnt even disserve to live in a changelings body, after what twilight had told him about the Changeling invasion. All his guilt, all of his pain, every last drop of emotion was swarming William like a Shark to a school of fish. William had enough of the scene. He turned to the yellow pegasis and yelled "GET OUT NOW. LEAVE ME ALONE!!!" He then continued to cry until he had fallen to sleep.

 

Pinkie pie was now feeling loads better since the doctor patched her up. "Im ok now Twilight. My ribs still hurt a bit, but besides that, I feel super duper. Speaking of super duper, I bet Gummy is super duper hungry, I better get home and feed him. Bye twilight and volt. See you tommorow morning." Pinkie rambled. Pinkie then proceeded home.

 

William was dreaming yet again, how ever, he was not on the blood covered pavement like last time. He was in his old mansion from his youth. He walked through the corridors, as if on a mission. He didnt know why, but he couldnt move his legs with will. It was as if they had a mind of there own as William strolled through the mansion. He entered a corridorhe barely remembered, it was the history walk. He started reading all of the portraits his legs guided to him. "Alyosha Popovich, young and cunning bogatyr of priest origin, defeated the dragon Tugarin Zmeyevich by trickery". His legs guided him to another "Nikita the Furrier, a town craftsman who released the daughter of Prince Vladimir the Fair Sun from the dragon's captivity" finally his legs walked him down to the end of the corridor "Ivan Tsarevich, typical noble protagonist of Russian fairy tales, often engaged in a struggle with Koschei and rescuing young girls" After that, his legs guided him to the middle of the corridor. There he sat, waiting for something, or someone. After a good 5 minutes, a bright light came out of no where. With that, he heard a very familiar voice: The voice of his true mother. William was on stunned to see her. She had died when he was 8 from a brain tumor. He was so happy to see her, but befor he could say anything, William's mother asked"What do all these people had in common. This was an easy one for William "They are all fairy tales?" William's mother respond with a swift "No" "There all good closer" "closer" "Thye all have swords?" "Now your cold again" "Well what is it?" william asked in frustration. William's mother responded in a calm voice "They were all hated at one point" William was in shock "What, no, they were all loved" William's mother guided him towards Alyosha's portrait "Alyosha was hated for the mean pranks he bestowed apon the towns people. After almost being killed, he decided to stop his reched rain of foolory and devote his life to something better. He bacame a priest and when everybody was done laughing at him for his "foolish" decision, a dragon by the name of Turigan came to the village and attacked the towns people. Everyone cowered and feared the dragon except for Alyosha. He battled the dragon and won.: William's mother guided him towards Nikita's portrait "Nikita was haited for his selfish rule over the country He had banished the sun and it was night forever. Until one night, he saw the death of 3 innocent young children, by his hand. He had realized what he was doing and released Vladimir the fair sun and devoted the rest of his life to helping the town. He even defended the town from a couple attacks. The day he died was a sad one. People loved and praised him." William`s mother guided him to the last portrait "Ivan was a mess up at everything. The towns people hated it when ever he tried to "help". However, one day, an evil beast came to the town and was about to kill the sisters of royalty. He saved the sisters, but it cost his life. The sisters used there royal powers to cast the beast into stone" She then guided William to a shining light and with that a piece of blank paper with a short biography :This is Sentio. He was a power hungry ruthless beast who killed many familys" then she paused. After a good couple of seconds William asked "Thats it. I thought he WAS hated. Not he is hated" William's mother stared at her son and calmly said "It is not finished yet" William let that process in his brain for a bit till he realized she was talking about him. "You are ment to do great things in this life. You have been given a chance at redemption. A chance few men ever have." But what if i mess up. What if i am not ment for this?" "You will not. You have done horrid deeds in your past life that can be redeemed. I know you and love you enough to know that you will not mess this up" "But everybody hates me. How can i perform redemption if im the most hated person in this knew place?" "It is called equestria, and i wouldnt say that." William looked up to his mother dumbfounded "Really?" "Yes, but who it is and who they are is not important right now" william nodded, a bit dissopoinnted. "But how do I become this Sentio person?" "Trust me. in time you will know and in time ..... You will be." With tha, William's mother was about to leave when William quickly asked one final question "Wait, before you go, you said that this was equestria. I could only assume that you know what equestria is and if you could teach me what equestria is and who the ponys i met today?" "Well of course, Equestria started long ago with the earth, pegasus and unicorn ponys hating each other....

 

(Sorry if this is super long, was in a typy mood tonight. And also, William's mother and father were not in the original cast. I dont know if this is frowned apon in RPs (If so, im sorry), but i needed them for this part of William's new life.)

Edited by Mr. Changeling

mrchabngelingwhatamatcha_zps0ba69862.png


 


Credit

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Being a nurse in the war was very difficate for Luna. So many people got injured it was hard for her to keep up with and then she seene some of the people die in there to but she never gave up. After a while she got dissy from over working and the never thing she new she was in a different place with all of these different people. A few months later after being a slave all of the people there lined up in a line and they started geting killed one by one in different ways and she started geting scared and didn't know what to do she had an idea later but it was to late it was her turn to die and she was shot in the head.

 

Luna woke up not remembering her name only and nothing else. "W-what wait where am I" Luna said looking around.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Jack wandered the forest not finding a way out. "Where the hell is the way out of this forest..." Jack said as he noticed he had wings. "Maybe I can fly out....but how the hell do I even do that" Jack said as he looked at the sky. "Assassins always know where they are...but this place is totally new"


EDWq5TC.png
Signature by the amazing:MiniKirby123

Link to comment
Share on other sites

×
×
  • Create New...