Hello.....=) i'd like your opinion

[Guest]

Hello =) I'ma a new musician that would love to hear your opinion. Any criticism is appreciated ofcourse =), if you dont like it tell me why, so i may improve =) the genre is ambient i guess...sort of...probably....i dont know

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=47_x4lp07Wc this is just one...please check out the rest and tell me your honest opinion,.tell me how i can improve, any opinion is appreciated =)

[Ihei 714]

Hey, this is really good! Did you make this yourself? DESERVES MORE VIEWS. MORE. This is a fine piece of music you have here; make more!

[Guest]

I did make this myself..i used cubase vst's and my piano =) i'm glad you like it, i thought it was bad XD i try and be punctuall with my uploads...1 per week

[Guest]

its coolio :3 they deserve more recognition i like the celestial dream one a lot u just earned a new subscriber if that means anything at all :3 ^-^ 

[Guest]

Thank you =3 every sub counts XD i dont ask people to..but hey if they think it's good the be my guest =3 thank you so much =) also...i didnt think anyone would like celestial dream XD that one's my least favourite

[Remi 1,309]

*Sees the title*

I can tell this is going to be feelsy.

*Listens to song*



*Hits two minute mark*



*Song ends*



That was simply marvellous, beautiful, a true piece of art. That song deserves more views. Wpuld you allow me to promote it onto my channel?

[Guest]

*Sees the title*

I can tell this is going to be feelsy.

 

*Listens to song*

 

 

*Hits two minute mark*

 

 

*Song ends*

 

 

That was simply marvellous, beautiful, a true piece of art. That song deserves more views. Wpuld you allow me to promote it onto my channel?

 

*Sees the title*

I can tell this is going to be feelsy.

 

*Listens to song*

 

 

*Hits two minute mark*

 

 

*Song ends*

 

 

That was simply marvellous, beautiful, a true piece of art. That song deserves more views. Wpuld you allow me to promote it onto my channel?

my oh my O.O i wasnt expecting a reaction like this =D well you may certainly promote it on your channel =3 also,...i just realised how to directly reply XD oh my sides....thank you again =)

[verycreativeusername 1,800]

I really like it, good job. It's a beautiful piece of art. This has also made me want to go and watch the Snowdrop video. I don't have much else to say.

Edited July 23, 2013 by ÷Zero

[packmule1123 55]

I enjoyed it! It was a very beautiful song. The art in the background was beautiful as well. If you enjoy making music you should definitely keep doing it.

[ricardofr-200 24]

O_O!!!!

So... to be honest... I had almost the same reaction as The Paris Swing Cake 

 

 

Amazing work! Nice picture choice, it matches very well with the music.

 

The music and the picture together, I don't know why but, it makes me remember the episode called Hearth's Warming Eve (SE2 E11), when the cave and the leaders were freezing.

[Guest]

O_O!!!!

 

So... to be honest... I had almost the same reaction as The Paris Swing Cake 

 

 

Amazing work! Nice picture choice, it matches very well with the music.

 

The music and the picture together, I don't know why but, it makes me remember the episode called Hearth's Warming Eve (SE2 E11), when the cave and the leaders were freezing.

Thank you =)....hmmm yeah it does doesnt it...now that i think about it O.O.....if only i knew who made the art so i may lgive them credit =( oh and again..thank you for your comment =) 

[Satsuki Kiryuin 1,155]

Wow, dude! This song sounds really trippy. It's so calm and the xylophone-ish synth adds such a haunting feel to it. It's really good! Well done, dude!~

[rainbowbrony2013 2]

This is an amazing piece of music you should post more of this kind of stuff 0.0

it kind of sounds like epic battle fantasy 3 snow world theme

[Syl50o5 8]

Oeehhh this is a nice piece of music, finally somepony who makes more slow music, more feel music. I havent seen anyone making this sort of music yet becouse it is so unpopulair, but i like it!

And i see on your channel that you make more of this sort of music, i love it :3

[Dashabel 381]

Hey, that's nice and relaxing! Super good.. In future you should definitely do more. I think what you need is some epic drums and more dramatically instrumental type music to gain more viewers.

[Guest]

Hey, that's nice and relaxing! Super good.. In future you should definitely do more. I think what you need is some epic drums and more dramatically instrumental type music to gain more viewers.

Well as Syl50o5 has said before i like to make slow music,...BUT i am infact working on a song called chaos rising (warning: title may change) which is going to be more dramatic...err...hopefully XD thanks for your support =3

Oeehhh this is a nice piece of music, finally somepony who makes more slow music, more feel music. I havent seen anyone making this sort of music yet becouse it is so unpopulair, but i like it!

And i see on your channel that you make more of this sort of music, i love it :3

Honestly i absoultely love movie soundtrack with slow ambient music =3 they relax me....XD whn you see me on the street with my black iron maiden shirt and my long hair,..and erhh sort of beard (i'm working on it XD) you would never guess that i'm a brony and that i like slow music,..like this XD..thanks for your support  =D /)

[♥.:Yulaiyre:.♥ 290]

Alright, it was nice. but I felt it was boring, not much going on in the song, also perhaps work on your keyboard skills a little, more of a melodic riff would have gone very well with that piece. 

 

Now, I am not saying it's bad, It's okay. But it doesn't exactly stand out, if you know what I mean? The song doesn't have depth. Try with a couple of different instruments playing together in harmony and such things. also Chords, chords are great for piano/keyboard pieces. Even Arpeggio is good. 

 

But yeah, you have a lot to improve on if you want to become recognised for your music, there is a lot of competition out there.

[DusK 1,264]

I'd really like to see you play the stereo field a bit more. Right now, the only thing filling the L/R soundscape is effects. The instruments are still triggering dead-center. Even in a simple piece like this, there's a lot you can do to give this piece an appropriate sense of space.

 

Don't be afraid to bring in the bass a bit more, even on airy ambient pieces like this.

 

Watch for those piercing, harmonic range-heavy synths, like at 2:03. I'm not sure what monitoring setup you have, but people using systems with a nice wide frequency response and lots of presence among frequencies (like my ATH-M45s) are gonna hear that loud and clear, and it's a bit off-putting. I'd fade those quickly, or use some surgical EQ to lessen remove those piercing elements.

[Guest]

I'd really like to see you play the stereo field a bit more. Right now, the only thing filling the L/R soundscape is effects. The instruments are still triggering dead-center. Even in a simple piece like this, there's a lot you can do to give this piece an appropriate sense of space.

 

Don't be afraid to bring in the bass a bit more, even on airy ambient pieces like this.

 

Watch for those piercing, harmonic range-heavy synths, like at 2:03. I'm not sure what monitoring setup you have, but people using systems with a nice wide frequency response and lots of presence among frequencies (like my ATH-M45s) are gonna hear that loud and clear, and it's a bit off-putting. I'd fade those quickly, or use some surgical EQ to lessen remove those piercing elements.

thanks for taking the time and writing this =) i will try and keep those things in mind,...well..i'm still getting the hang of cubase so, well pratice makes perfect, i will most definatelly take into consideration your advice =D thanks, and stay awesome =3

Alright, it was nice. but I felt it was boring, not much going on in the song, also perhaps work on your keyboard skills a little, more of a melodic riff would have gone very well with that piece. 

 

Now, I am not saying it's bad, It's okay. But it doesn't exactly stand out, if you know what I mean? The song doesn't have depth. Try with a couple of different instruments playing together in harmony and such things. also Chords, chords are great for piano/keyboard pieces. Even Arpeggio is good. 

 

But yeah, you have a lot to improve on if you want to become recognised for your music, there is a lot of competition out there.

Hey thanks for replying and taking the time to check this thing out =3,...yeah XD i know my keyboard playing skills are a bit rusty,..i've been playing the piano for about 8 year then i had a long brake..of about 2 years so yeah XD...i will work on bringing more depth to my songs...and yes arpegios are good,..and i do plan on using them. Thank you =3 for your advice will definatelly work on improving XD /) .....

Edited July 24, 2013 by Guest

[letterone 1,204]

You're NEW to this?

 

Well.

 

I really like it. It's got really nice atmosphere and an almost glitchy sound, and those are two aspects I ALWAYS like. I also enjoy the lower-frequency sub-bassy sounds that occur every now and then. You've got a very nice song here. I'd love to see what other ambient-type things you can do.

[Guest]

You're NEW to this?

 

Well.

 

I really like it. It's got really nice atmosphere and an almost glitchy sound, and those are two aspects I ALWAYS like. I also enjoy the lower-frequency sub-bassy sounds that occur every now and then. You've got a very nice song here. I'd love to see what other ambient-type things you can do.

hahaha XD yeah i am new to this..started making music about a month ago,..i'm also a relativelly new brony,...been a brony for about 4 months now XD,..and well thank you will make more music once i get home from my vacation =3, thanks for taking the time and listening to my song

[Scarlet 16]

It's so awesome! Not like my damn acoustic music xD If you started month ago, you are really cool. Hope you will make more brilliant music.

Edited July 24, 2013 by Scarlet

[Guest]

It's so awesome! Not like my damn acoustic music xD If you started month ago, you are really cool. Hope you will make more brilliant music.

XD....cmon....dont put yourself down =( I for one would love to hear your music =D, ofcourse if you'd let me =3 you should persevere,....hmmm i'm guessing you play the guitar? If so...i do to =D cmon dont be shy and send me your music =3

[Dusty Soul 2,612]

I really like it.  It has a very nice "snowy" sound to it.  It could use more bass, and the high synth parts are sometimes very piercing.  Overall it's a nice piece.