The Pony That Promised

[Dashabel 381]

I was bored the other day and wrote a really short story that actually surprised me. I felt quite sad towards the end.

I wondered if it would make either people sad so if you want to read it, feel free: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122059/1/the-pony-that-promised/the-pony-that-promised

 

You don't have to give me a long paragraph on how to improve and what's wrong with it; I know perfectly well it's terrible. But like I said, it was just quick and something to pass my time.

 

I want other people to read it so I posted it here.

[duidamasterXD 9,627]

@@Dashabel,

 

I've moved your thread to the Fanfiction section of Octavia's Hall, since the purpose of your thread is to share one you've written.