Finesthour 7,277 Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 Together we are, in my happy dreams. Forever we stay, happiness we always feel. This is the dream that I crave for, this is the dream I will die for. I never want to lose you, yet I am always afraid you will leave me. The future looks so bright in my head, but fear muddles me down. I want us to be happy together, but horrible thoughts crave my fear. You say you love me, but then you say you are bored. My constant love and attention is not to your pleasure, wishing other subjects were handled. But you are the only thing that goes through my mind, the only interesting subject there is. But alas, that subject must not stay. For years I have given my heart to others, and the same situation occurs. I cannot change how I am, no matter how much I try. You tire of "I love you", yet you say it as well. Now I am afraid to say this at all in fear you will be bored, and that pains my heart. Please don't leave me like all the others, I want you to be the one who saves me. You have done it before, and I wish you will do it again. I hope these happy dreams stay alive, and do not become vicious nightmares. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Shadrahk 158 Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 A poem and it's hopeful. Nice writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strong Hooves 289 Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 We hope for the best for you Rose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandwhisper 33 Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 I am afraid The magic you whisper about Has run out from my fingers And no longer can I Be your Superwoman But by the steps I make And the breaths I take I will not let you fall I will not let your touch slip from mine Because I'm still nestled close to your heart And I'm not letting go If anyone's got anything to say on it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HomuraBL 848 Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 You're doing good Finest, just keep remembering that dream. You will go far, I just know it. I believe in you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fizz. 1,078 Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 So, lemme get this straight, you two love each other but you don't? In all honesty I have no idea what's going on here, can someone explain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proailurus 214 Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 Rose feels like he's losing Sandwhisper even though they both love each other because other people have acted like they loved rose but didn't in the past and it's kinda confusing lol.................. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HomuraBL 848 Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 (edited) So, lemme get this straight, you two love each other but you don't? In all honesty I have no idea what's going on here, can someone explain? They do love each other very much. Its just that Finest/rose has been through a couple of heartbreaks and bad moments in his life. He doesn't want another one. He is afraid of disappointing his now new love. That is the abridged version of it anyway. Edited February 19, 2012 by RaccoonBL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anachronous 682 Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 This is like one of my soap operas. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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