Hand Drawing...

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So this is my first time ever drawing a pony by hand! I think it turned out pretty good! My 14 year old brother wanted a pony, so i made two ponies! him and me!

 

Is there anything i should change?

 

And yes. I know. My face looks a bit fat. It's not easy to draw when i'm banging my head to dubstep. @_@

Edited September 15, 2013 by Frozen Mass

[Grand_Finale 529]

Wow, this is awesome! It's very accurate and the colors go really well together. You get my seal of approval. I don't even have any criticisms, these guys are sweet!

[Batbrony 16,087]

For a hand drawing with as complete coloring as this, this is extraordinarily lovely!  No apparent flaws that I can spot!  Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and kudos for doing a nice thing for your brother!!  That kind act alone gets my Bat-seal of approval!  Hope to see more art from you soon, and good luck as you continue to refine your craft! 

[Frosty V 309]

I like just how accurate it is! The coloring looks very well done in my honest opinion. I hope to see more art like this from you. but until such a time I bid you a 10 OUT OF 10 MY FINE GENTLEMAN!

[Jokuc 8,174]

 

 

10 OUT OF 10 MY FINE GENTLEMAN!

You know she's a girl, right? :3

 

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The drawing is really good! Like in actually really good. It reminds me of the show's quality, however it reminds me of something else more. If you don't mind me saying it, it kinda looks like this was drawn from Pony Creator references :3 If it is then don't worry, you're still a great artist being able to make it look so good. And if it's not, you're even better! The only thing I would like to be changed is the eye on your brother's pony there, it looks a little bit weird if you ask me. The image would look a lot better if they were at least looking at each other

 

But good job!

[Frosty V 309]

You know she's a girl, right? :3

 

I am fully aware of the gender assigned to the person in quesion.....I just call everyone gentleman......DON'T YOU JUDGE ME GOD FLIBBLE FLABBITY FLABBIT *over dramaticaly flips desk*

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You know she's a girl, right? :3

 

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The drawing is really good! Like in actually really good. It reminds me of the show's quality, however it reminds me of something else more. If you don't mind me saying it, it kinda looks like this was drawn from Pony Creator references :3 If it is then don't worry, you're still a great artist being able to make it look so good. And if it's not, you're even better! The only thing I would like to be changed is the eye on your brother's pony there, it looks a little bit weird if you ask me. The image would look a lot better if they were at least looking at each other

 

But good job!

First off, Thanks! But i just googled around for other ponies and took their hairstyles

 

Thank you so much!

 

I'll fix the eye!

[Lucky Lass 528]

It's a good start coloring wise, but I would say try to get away from the style of the MLP OC generator.

Both their lifted legs have joints bending the wrong way or have a joint missing. For your character there would be a bend down for the elbow, right now what would be your elbow joint is bending up. On your brother's character he has a bend too far up where there wouldn't be one. Where his bend is there should be just shoulder muscle, then you could move the elbow down and the 'knee' would be further up. Even though the show is stylized they still follow basic horse anatomy.
 

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It's a good start coloring wise, but I would say try to get away from the style of the MLP OC generator.

Both their lifted legs have joints bending the wrong way or have a joint missing. For your character there would be a bend down for the elbow, right now what would be your elbow joint is bending up. On your brother's character he has a bend too far up where there wouldn't be one. Where his bend is there should be just shoulder muscle, then you could move the elbow down and the 'knee' would be further up. Even though the show is stylized they still follow basic horse anatomy.

 

Thanks for being honest! I'll keep that joint thing in mind... Or i'll just look it up on google first becouse i have no idea what you are talking about! ^^

 

Thanks!

[Ratchet Copperwire 49]

thats some good ponies right there! squeee!!! <33

I think its cutely drawn :3 i dont like giving any critiques though, maybe because i cant find any hehe Well done!