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Slice of Life My First Days in Ponyville


OrangeRiff
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Hi Everypony!

 

I've always been more of a musician, as I like to compose, and play the bass, but lately I started to socalize on the forums and some similar places.

Also I started to create an OC by the name Orange Riff, who is my main pony-persona, so I thought about writing a background story for him/myself, to find a place in the world of MLP.

As my native language is not english, I'm having a bit of a hard time writing, but I uploaded a prologue and a 1. chapter of the story on fimfiction.

link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164436/my-first-days-in-ponyville

If any of you dear bronies/ponies/pegasisters/etc. have the time and would lend a helping hoof by reading and commenting on this, I would be most thankfull. :)

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[uPDATE]

I just uploaded Chapter 2.

If there was anypony who liked it so far, feel free to read on.

If you haven't read the first one, go, and enjoy the ride from the begining :)

 

edit:

I would stil apreciate some comments...

Be it good, be it bad, like or hate, positive or negative criticism, suggestions, they are all welcome!

If you have some time to spare, give that reply button a gentle push ;)

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