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[RainbowDashie 767]

WORK IN PROGRESS

 

MLP FIM FANFICTION BY RainbowDashie

 

It was a nice and sunny day. It was the day that my little girl had to go on stage. I rushed upstairs to wake her up, but she was gone. i rushed to the bathroom, and there she was. My girl was brushing her teeth already. Normally i would have to start a war to get her out of bed but now, now she was earlier awake then me. She brushed her hair, washed her face, flossed and even did some make up. Most people know her as a normal ADHD child, but now she wasn't. She was very calm. As we walked to the theater she was the ADHD child as i know her. We entered the back door so we could enter stage immediately. When she had to go on stage i said: "Do the best you can, little girl" "Dad i'm 20, i am not a little girl" And she ran on stage. She sang just as beautiful as normal. As she ran of stage i said: "You did so well, Pinkie"

[Twich 15]

I'm not sure where this is going... when will you add more?

[RainbowDashie 767]

When i wrote more

[I used to be a stranger 7,989]

Apart from some blatant grammatical errors, it's a pretty clever flash-fiction. Bravo.

[Marcato 2,143]

Interesting. I always liked stories that take place when the mane are older.