fan fic help, please

[Concerto Dusk 240]

im trying to write a fan fic based on the ever popular fan started..... Equestrian war. instead of celestia being evil, she is just plain insane thanks to factors starting when she banished nightmare moon. also i dont plan on including luna until later on in the story, if more details are needed please ask. thank you in advance

[repsol rave 2,963]

well what exacty is it you need help with? forming a plot, or grammar fixes?

[Concerto Dusk 240]

style of writing, making a good buildup, it is a set of two(i might make a third one) stories, one from my ocs point of view, one from an oc named duskshade, (my oc mirrorwing works for celestia, Duskshade for luna, but duskshade has to be in before i can even bring luna back, this is why im having troubles

[Its Rainbow Dash 151]

I'm doing something similar I have a idea I'm planning to make into a trilogy., I'm starting with one set of characters and have the first part end taking off with another Character.

 

Style of writing use one that fits you myself I'm detailed and usually focus on characters emotions and thoughts rather then what is going on around but that is my style find your own you love and flaunt it.

 

Be it Detailed story telling, First person Pov or just something new find what clicks.

 

As for buildup throw in some curves when telling a story make a chapter that seems normal end with a bang do something people just didn't see coming and of course never put all your cards down on the table., tell a story without making it guessable as to where it's going and always keep the best for last plot wise.

 

Last with the bringing characters in problem write it in the story once you've weaved in enough plot in the tale to do so I have many ideas I just want to write about now but know it's not time., write till it feels right to do so even if it means writing something you don't really have the umph for it's all part of the tangled web that is fiction.

 

That is all I have for pointers if you can or have a draft of this tale to read I could get inside it's head and maybe help more detailed at fixing or adding plot aka meat to the tale lol.

[Concerto Dusk 240]

i only have one more question, how do i surmise over 1000 yearswithout boring the reader?