[Video/Writing] Poem for a short video I made

[TheChosenPony 279]

I made this just now, It was for this video I made promoting a game.

 

It's my first time writing any sort of poem, how do you like it?

 

 

Poem

We sat together in the darkness, afraid and unsure.

 

Of the terrifying fate we might endure

 

The shrill sound of the screams, not joys

 

was the only thing that made any noise.

 

Noone is sure of his intentions

 

Noone knows where we will go

 

Some say a place of joy, others sorrow

 

Some say there is only peace that is borrowed

 

The beast has come once again

 

to take us to a place we cannot understand

 

Video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pUs7A2sCnZs&list=UUBzL2FNUEBZSYjlNhNWi3cQ

Edited March 24, 2014 by TheChosenPony